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Surely Not Here by Meadowhawk
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Surely Not Here

By Meadowhawk

Is there a sky that is always blue
with an endless procession
of cottony white clouds
marching on the breath of winds
to points undiscovered

Surely not here
Here the sky has grown dark
Clouds roll in silent pain
as they spill forth
countless acidic tears
upon the breast
of a fading mother

Is there a lake that is always clear
with waves that dance
in the golden sunshine
lapping with a hypnotic rhythm

Surely not here
Here the water is tainted and corrupt
A thousand years
of greed and indifference
a thousand more of neglect
have poisoned the life blood
of a sister to the stars

Is there a land that is still virgin
with verdant fields
that sing with the color of flowers
swaying gently
amidst a chorus of scents

Surely not here
Here the land is barren and harsh
The parasites
too long unchecked
have devoured all
that lay before them
leaving in their wake
the scarred face
of an aged matriarch

Now her children cry out
Mother, we are frightened.

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Copyright 2010 Meadowhawk
Published on Tuesday, March 2, 2010.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"

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  • prodigy789 On Tuesday, June 26, 2012, prodigy789 (46) wrote:

    that was truly amazing

     
  • Wr1tt3n V3ng3anc3 On Friday, January 27, 2012, Wr1tt3n V3ng3anc3 (249) wrote:

    A Well Deserved Poem of the Day! Breathtaking emotional scripturing and Intricate, and Stunning Imagery. Thank you This is Definitely for Keeps!

     
  • Musik2MyEyes On Sunday, April 4, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (251) wrote:

    Ohhh this makes me so sad! I love Mother Nature so much...I find a true sense of peace alone with her. And you point out the damage being done. I'm so glad I live where there is no witnessing of this. I have all the beauty surrounding me from the positive verses of your piece. And I am extremely thankful.

     
  • Deaths Apostle On Thursday, March 25, 2010, Deaths Apostle (90) wrote:

    Amazing imagery, and a perfect ending....Good Write

     
  • MercyRain On Tuesday, March 2, 2010, MercyRain (109) wrote:

    this can surely be an anthem for change... we have aged the mother, taken her beauty of youth and pockmocked her skin... but she has suffered calamities before us and she will suffer calamities long after we are gone... in one form or another, life will continue, but are we genetic evolution or a virus awaiting her immuno-response?

     
  • Dilated View On Tuesday, March 2, 2010, Dilated View (539) wrote:

    I think you nailed this one. The last full stanza and last two lines were dripping with truth. Overall a fine piece.

     
  • kayoticfear On Tuesday, March 2, 2010, kayoticfear (97) wrote:

    My god this was awesome. I wish i had such the talent with words

     
  • Malcholm Dark On Tuesday, March 2, 2010, Malcholm Dark (1198) wrote:

    My breath was taken! This is the finest piece you have written, The very best I have read. The planet needs more poets like you, please keep writting. Your dark approach to our problems was a master-stroke.

     

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