God's sin...a cowrite with dissolving poet

I feel a fire flickering inside of me.
Pouring out into delicious sin.
I felt your hand crawl up.
Slowly, tickling the little hairs on my skin.
I sighed lustfully.
Wrapping my arms around your neck.
Would you give me everything I desire?
Everything and more.

Oh, how I crave your fire.
Quenching to burn.
press your embers to my pale and quivering timber
and ignite me, lover...
consume me with licks of flame and torrents of heat.
my wetness can't deter these flames, only add the deliciousness of sweetness and sweat, skin slipping against skin as we writhe into a crackling frenzy, building to the explosion we both crave.

if we're going to hell for the sins of this flesh, let the road to hell be paved with sweet exchanges and little kisses, lusty sighs and heated gazes


Keep your hands on me.
All through the night.
I want to be enraptured.
I know I could rock your world.
With each lazy slow roll of the hips.
I know god is secretly watching us.
His hand against his.. mmmmm.

You pressed me just right.
Hitting the spot that makes me ever so hot.
Sin again with me, baby.
Until we break all the rules.
Lets play Adam and Eve.
It could be so much fun.

Lets give his almighty a show.
Give him something to.. talk about.

In my garden the apples and peaches, cherries and strawberries are all ripe and lucious.
god envies the way your eyes feast upon me
longing to taste my forbidden fruit
savoring every juicy nibble
every profane lick that sets my eyes rolling
puts a fever on my skin that cannot be hidden
has me begging and moaning for the serpent
to fill me again with its promise..
i'll know good and i'll know evil
and together we'll rule both, mating them
in this one place
where heaven and earth penetrate each other
and moan each others names


Where angels ejacluate and hold hands.
Singing their praises as we make love.
Over and over again.
Until our bodies are spent and broken.
We will find the divining energy once again.
So our bodies can commit even more sin.
I want to be bent over.
Taken from deep behind.

On my hands and knees.
Letting you devour my soul.
There doesn't need to be a devil.
And a deed.
We are committing that deed.
Endulging on our every need.
Pushing deeper and harder in.

I can't help but scream your name.
It's like fucking god.
And, holding him close to my bosom.
It's like breaking god.
Don't you just love it.
Don't you just feel heaven breaking.
Falling to it's knees.

We are being praised.
Like gods and goddesses.
As we bask in ecstasy
and hell cries out in aroused fury;
rocked and awed by the way we
touched evil, tained it with good,
licked and tasted it like the drops of blood my nails drew from your chest...
grinned like damned saints and holy demons
drank it all down and worshipped each other.
then lay spent, praying in gasps and shudders
until we caught our breath like the roar of the tongues of flame and with the zeal of the demented
bowed to worship at our temples again

• On Wednesday, May 20, 2009, Ainsof (2120) wrote:
  
  hmmmm well, to some extent this didn't invoke a sufficient amount of subtlety.. and the subtlety it started with read more like hesitation than a metaphor striving to erupt... but it was very lustful with rather blatant blaspheme sprinkled about... marked by some erotic imagery to be sure.
  
  
• On Thursday, May 14, 2009, sixsixnine (573) wrote:
  
  cool work :)~
  
  
• On Friday, May 8, 2009, elisa (1891) wrote:
  
  ...even God needs a sacrilegious fuck from time2time. love it.
  
  
• On Thursday, May 7, 2009, saintedmad (1424) wrote:
  
  mmmm...i want to say so much. . .. but i shall refrain a bit....honestly, i find this a bit degrading, defiling, and a wee bit contemptuous.. .. . maybe i am commenting overboard on this particular write. .. but it seems DP is evolving into a sexshop; im tired of it. not to spill on your write on purpose, but this was the 11th poem in a row ive read that just simply basically 'described' sex....no intimacy, no subtlety... im worn out with it; and not in the good way. and normally, when i read something i dun agree with or dislike or think immature, base, etc, i do NOT comment. . . but after a while.....
  
  
• On Thursday, May 7, 2009, MESUN (288) wrote:
  
  now that was the epitomy of sinfully delicious. i feel like a holyman without a religion finally coming across something that arouses the...spirit.
  
  
• On Thursday, May 7, 2009, Winter Born (203) wrote:
  
  By the Gods! I suddenly have prose streamming through my head! I faved this before I got to the 5th stanza! So Inspiring! Shit... now I have to write something... Thanks.
  
  
• On Thursday, May 7, 2009, Mylissa (1128) wrote:
  
  I love poetry that evokes emotion of passion. Honestly, it is my favorite form. I think this does just that so very well done.
  
  
• On Thursday, May 7, 2009, Pryzm (84) wrote:
  
  mmmmmmm my jeans are crowded....very well done.
  
  
• On Thursday, May 7, 2009, mysticventures (554) wrote:
  
  what a write!!! left me at a loss for words - only wanting more
  
  
• On Thursday, May 7, 2009, Mab (1193) wrote:
  
  sexilicious in all its finery...god, what a write to wake up to!
  
  
• On Thursday, May 7, 2009, ALBATROSS (226) wrote:
  
  HOLY FUCKING TITS that aroused my senses. But you two are spellbinding in the art of eros so I could only expect the best from this meld. I've been uninspired by most of the writes lately but you rekindled it with your "licks of flame and torrents of heat" Excellent! Thank you.
  
  
• A former member wrote: i feel as if you are using your imagery as trickery to draw me in, my attention cries for it I suppose. good medicine.
  
  
• On Thursday, May 7, 2009, whisperer (217) wrote:
  
  one word of one letter...mmmmmmmmmmmmmm