inertia.

in this body
I am merely
atoms responding
to a pull
with pink lips
and a feverish
forehead

like pressure
on a hinge
all this force
in my blue
dress, like
a peacock
with tar on
it’s feathers
and you just
push, trying
to alter my
state of
motion but
I will not
give

• On Thursday, May 7, 2009, snowdrop (2154) wrote:
  
  Missing you.
  
  
• On Tuesday, May 5, 2009, Winter Born (205) wrote:
  
  I think that it speaks volumes about your inner strength. never give girl.
  
  
• On Monday, May 4, 2009, Equinox Asylum (152) wrote:
  
  Radiant write. You know i adore the stabbing effect of a dagger. Short and devestatingly profound. Nice to see your back in the fold, as am i.
  
  
• On Monday, May 4, 2009, The Prophet Untold (522) wrote:
  
  There is quite a pull to this short piece. Always profound, always stellar. Grasping work. +tpu+
  
  
• On Monday, May 4, 2009, Alanarchy (1487) wrote:
  
  Great to see ya posting. Do it some more. :D Write on, bethy-beth.
  
  
• On Monday, May 4, 2009, Morbid_insanity (129) wrote:
  
  i liked it. it was strong classy, ad very straight foward.
  
  
• On Monday, May 4, 2009, whisperer (217) wrote:
  
  simple, elegant, and to the point
  
  
• On Monday, May 4, 2009, carlosjackal (1803) wrote:
  
  You are a Lady :)
  
  
• On Monday, May 11, 2009, carlosjackal (1803) wrote:
  
  ...and the Lady doth not post enough :)
  
  
• On Monday, May 4, 2009, RubyXero (525) wrote:
  
  very nice flow. i like the picture that it created, for me at least.
  
  
• On Monday, May 4, 2009, MoonishBunny (718) wrote:
  
  you have inspired as poem, but i think it best not to post it here. ^^ thank you for ze inspiration though. *hugs*
  
  
• On Monday, May 4, 2009, heartdripsblack (682) wrote:
  
  you always make me think at least twice when I read your work. very, very good as always. ~ hdb.