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star sex. by Anna Helianthus
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star sex.

~ Anna Helianthus ~



featuring Six-Out


sea salt in open wounds
and your lips kissing tension like
full moon sonatas. truck bed temptress
teasing the stars to dance in heartbeat motion.
the tide is coming in
and we're sitting on the edge of creation.

hand in hand. no city lights- dear
the diamonds play piano notes in the water
and when the waves crash out of tune
I can feel your pulse in my palm.

but it's erratic, that steady beat
like a car with no drivers, like the
unpredictable twists of an ocean
with no sand. your kiss, leaving me
bruised as the stars dance, folding into
the wind and creating these universes
for you and I to dance in. if you
could just hold me in your hands
for a little longer, the world
would have meaning

and there's magic in the way our fingers interlace
lips speaking tidal waves, and you
taking the stars hostage in your eyes.
because you breed dreams when you stare at me
in that way. passion needs pen and paper
to take notes- you're the standard of beauty.

like hands upon hands interlacing to create
flowers upon the sands, as we're
lying on the roof of a truck
and become part of the stars
we can become immortal
in each other's eyes, as the earth decays
into a hurricane of violence

and I'm content with erosion.
while the world falls apart.

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  • whisperer On Friday, February 13, 2009, whisperer (217) wrote:

    star sex has mind fucked me *grins softly* beautiful, like morphine to ease the passing

  • Lavenia On Friday, November 28, 2008, Lavenia (123) wrote:

    "and you taking the stars hostage in your eyes. because you breed dreams when you stare at me in that way." wow...I read this verse, these particular lines, and my heart skipped several beats...Beautiful, very beautiful...

  • saintedmad On Thursday, November 27, 2008, saintedmad (1425) wrote:

    that 5th strophe is beyond affecting....softly impacting..and teh closing couplet [like a fiercely soft coming together and falling, apart]....y'all are something else when standing alone, but intertwined.....::shakes head:: wow.

  • Anth On Thursday, November 27, 2008, Anth (1438) wrote:

    this is a very clever collab that has worked out perfectly, the ending is aboslutely brilliant, its a simple idea but its made into something so universal, romantic yet illusive. this poem reminded me of the ending of southland tales, not because of the truck but the meeting of two souls sparking a new dawn at the worlds end and their ascension, such a wonderful work to read, i cant praise it enough

  • A former member wrote: poetry at its finest,...massive accolades on the collaboration,..cant fault it,..just epic in its connection ...truly loved it....well done.

  • Leith Plunkett On Thursday, November 27, 2008, Leith Plunkett (371) wrote:

    The imagery is spectacular. A beautiful piece. It draws you in in such a unique way. Look forward to reading more of your work

  • Rachel On Thursday, November 27, 2008, Rachel (306) wrote:

    Fucking beach bums.

  • edenscancer On Thursday, November 27, 2008, edenscancer (47) wrote:

    I enjoyed this piece a lot. you took me away from my life for a moment. thank you.

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Wednesday, November 26, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (693) wrote:

    You two need to do this again some time. Seriously. Thank you both for this.


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