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Pterodactyl Dance by DarkPoet
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Pterodactyl Dance

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Nebojsa
Zivkovic
had a drum
banged on it
made me dream
machine guns
hand grenades
rocket blaze
smoky hills
screaming men
bloody face
just a drum
made me dream

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  • heroineyes On Monday, November 17, 2008, heroineyes (94) wrote:

    made me think of a silver mount zion's "god bless our dead marines"...just the tone and flow

     
  • Alanarchy On Monday, November 17, 2008, Alanarchy (1211) wrote:

    Percussion is so visceral. It's amazing how good drummers express so vividly. The stop/start lines had me thinking in toms. Cool shit.

     
  • elisa On Monday, November 17, 2008, elisa (1817) wrote:

    skin striking skin... leaves a fingerprint on the membrane.

     

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