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Heavy Metal Girl by allenthepope
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Heavy Metal Girl

~ allenthepope ~

Heavy metal girl, the way you move just takes me in...
takes me somewhere I've never been
cause me to sin...
again...
violently orchestrating your thin body into waves of energy and things I can't understand...
your limp stringy hair flying in perfect chaos...
your body explodes and convulses with the sick, thrash that's the reason we're all here.
And for just a second...the music LOUDLY STOPS...
heavy metal girl spits and sweats and gives true meaning for the world to continue........
Here comes the feed back and then
yeah___we're slamin', you're in the pit, ain't takin' no shit, holdin' your own, and THEN some.....
your face, needing air but glowing like an angel....
fallen...and finally found her place.......
little scratch on your face, knees kind of dirty
but I'm not worthy of your wasted glance,
you're much too strong for me....
heavy metal girl___

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  • A former member wrote: Good, I like it keep wrighting.

     
  • BethanyBallet On Tuesday, November 11, 2008, BethanyBallet (24) wrote:

    One day, i want a guy to say this about me. It couldn't have been written better...

     
  • veingo On Sunday, November 9, 2008, veingo (603) wrote:

    Yeah! Welcome to the vally. ^V^

     
  • Fantecstasy On Sunday, November 9, 2008, Fantecstasy (155) wrote:

    I solemnly wish I could find a chick who was into heavy metal.

     
  • Echoes of Orpheus On Sunday, November 9, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (459) wrote:

    haha, you don't look very hard then my friend :P

     

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