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the right atrium. by Anna Helianthus
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the right atrium.

~ Anna Helianthus ~






he said

it's painful to see you
when your heart is open
but your legs are closed

i said

it's painful to see you
when your legs are open
but your heart is closed.





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  • veingo On Friday, September 19, 2008, veingo (458) wrote:

    A relationship at odds. Now where have I heard that befor??? ^V^

  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, September 17, 2008, carlosjackal (1801) wrote:

    Very well said. "he" + "i" = Fucking Disaster. Rock on, Lady Bethany! -Carlos Daddio

  • saintedmad On Wednesday, September 17, 2008, saintedmad (1425) wrote:

    polar opposites. .. . i love the rightside perspective added as well .. .a different literal view. . .

  • blue On Wednesday, September 17, 2008, blue (1605) wrote:

    smash his peepee with gungfu and watch him come round. or just do it for fun =) ni-chan rawr.


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