just a storm.

they say
that rainwater
can smooth
a crocodile complexion

i wonder if the salt
from his tears
can do the same

• On Saturday, September 13, 2008, The Zebra Warrior (2209) wrote:
  
  kind of a proverb poem...perhaps the notion of 'crocadile tears' eludes to a faux sadness, or a self-refelctive one that is being questioned amongst the nature of others or maybe all things, with the crocadile really being incidental to the inner feeling..?
  
  
• On Thursday, June 19, 2008, Lolita (190) wrote:
  
  I don't think so, because then crocodiles would have prettier faces.
  
  
• On Saturday, September 13, 2008, The Zebra Warrior (2209) wrote:
  
  haha...a great answer: there you have it :D
  
  
• A former member wrote: What an unusual thing to say....i love it.
  
  
• On Tuesday, May 13, 2008, carlosjackal (1801) wrote:
  
  Simply perfection :) Your writes are missed :(
  
  
• On Saturday, May 10, 2008, saintedmad (1425) wrote:
  
  .....paradox isnt it? perfectly succinct and resonant; only you could 'see' this in the world. :} ness
  
  
• On Saturday, May 10, 2008, veingo (458) wrote:
  
  So short, but powerfull. I get a hopeful, but somber feeling from this. It's good to read you again Doll. ^V^