Ass to Shower

I feel sweat dripping into my eyes,
As I taste the sweet sweat drip down my thighs.
I love you darling, I whisper as I rub myself.
I lay my head against the pillows and dream,
and float in this tiny universe. I leave my eyes
open as I hear your voice inside of my head.
Telling me where to touch and to not stop.

To feel you here, when your so far away.
Is like a dream that I keep living.
Growing more satisfied. I feel you here
as I come to a climax, it quakes my thirst.
Just barely. I rock my heels back and forth.
As I feel the flame scorch once again.
I feel you dig your cock deep inside of my ass.
As I hold my knees up to my chest.

Your breathing quickens as you push deeper
and further inside of my depths. I feel like
I'm floating on a cloud of ecstasy. You
begin to kiss my shoulders, my breasts, my
face. As you rock hard and fast into me.
Making me whimper, cry, moan, beg.
I rub my fingers down my clit, swimming
into my depths and rocking to the rythmn
you set. It feels so good to burn like this.

I smell sex in the air and it just heightens
the mood, as you make me keep my eyes
open and look deep into yours. I cry out
as I cum again and again. Pulling my
legs closer to me, as you fuck me until I
feel the ache begin to throb into agony.
But, you know I enjoy the way you make
me feel. As you go deep inside of me,
deeper then ever before.

I hear your pants, and your scratchy moans.
They consume my mind and take control.
I come to a climax, and feel your sperm into
inside of my depths, I smile softly and kiss
your lips. You stretch my legs out and begin
to lay kisses all over my body. The shiny
illumination from the sweat that drips into
the corroded fabric. You whisper "I love you"
between a breathy kiss.

You pull away and walk seductively to the bathroom.
I follow you with shaky legs and a semen dripping
down my legs. You turn on the shower, and we get
in. Kissing and attaching ourselves to each other.
You let me go and I grab the bar of soap. I rub you
down, every inch of your skin. Remaining on the
parts that matter. And, I see your erection peek through
the sods. You do the same to me, and I grow more
aroused.

I straddle your hips and mount you, dropping down
hard on your cock. Burying it into the hilt. Feeling
the hot water cascade down my shoulders, as I slowly
move up and down. Pressing my finger-nails into your
back. Clutching tightly as you bite every part of my
body that you can. You press my back against the
wall. And, pull my lip between your teeth.

A slow growl escapes my throat, and I look at you with
fire in my eyes. I grind you hard, and fast. Causing
heady breaths to fall from our throats. I dig my nails
deeper into your shoulders, as I feel the water start to
grow cold. I move my body with a quickness that makes
you rock on your feet. I feel you shudder as more
cums fills me to the brim, and drips down my buttocks.
I lick your lips. Keeping you ebbed deep inside.

I close my eyes, and feel you throughout my body.
You wash away all our sweet play, and we get out
and fall into bed. To wait until we're hungry for
more.












Author's Note:

Be respectful, or don't bother

• On Thursday, February 5, 2009, freudian-slip (342) wrote:
  
  I definitely don't think it was written with the intent to be crude-just explicit.
  
  
• On Thursday, February 5, 2009, freudian-slip (342) wrote:
  
  well I was begging for something real, and there it was. this is REAL. be it "dirty" or "porno-literate"- I like it.
  
  
• On Thursday, February 5, 2009, Prophint (21) wrote:
  
  too crude, this is the **** people write for a porn forum.
  
  
• On Friday, February 6, 2009, The Prophet Untold (523) wrote:
  
  I can agree and disagree. There are hints of poetic intent, but when it gets down to it, it's just a dirty write, very well done I may add. Whats too crude to you is nursery rhymes to other people. She didn't go into strangling people and fisting buttholes, so it's pretty mild.
  
  
• A former member wrote: I don't usually weigh in on comments feuds but . . . I dunno. If you think this is crude go try an issue of Penthouse Letters. Those are far more crude and in terms of crudeness this doesn't even rank close to them.
  
  
• On Thursday, February 5, 2009, SilentStalker (1244) wrote:
  
  *goes searching for Penthouse Letters*
  
  
• A former member wrote: I think Penthouse Letters would be far too mild for you Stalker.
  
  
• A former member wrote: As for the work itself. Was it explicit? yes. Passionate? Sure came across that way (pun intended). A good read? In my humble opinion, most definitely. Thank you to the author for sharing this little window into their life, be it reality or fantasy.
  
  
• On Friday, February 6, 2009, elisa (1891) wrote:
  
  definitely an excellent display of creative subtlety... especially considering the much needed growl toward the end.
  
  
• On Thursday, February 5, 2009, Miss Dahlia (209) wrote:
  
  if you don't like it, don't bash it. I'm not a fan of this kind of poetry but i don't go around pissing people off to prove it. echo gold dust. dont like it, dont read it.
  
  
• On Thursday, February 5, 2009, Lady Grinning Soul (201) wrote:
  
  thats why they call poems like this Erotica. if you dont like it, dont read it.
  
  
• A former member wrote: wow!! so realistci...i can almost feel....i need a shower...and that too!!!
  
  
• A former member wrote: This is hot! I want to read more now
  
  
• On Thursday, September 18, 2008, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (153) wrote:
  
  You write as only someone who truly loves can. Who truly enjoys all the elements of the sexual nature and lives it as it happens. Very Beautiful. You definatly leave your readers wanting. -Heather-
  
  
• On Thursday, July 3, 2008, warmaprylrain (188) wrote:
  
  you paint pictures with your words so well... I liked this
  
  
• On Tuesday, May 20, 2008, gloominous (5) wrote:
  
  thats hot!!
  
  
• On Saturday, May 10, 2008, Mars (717) wrote:
  
  HOT. -mars
  
  
• On Tuesday, April 29, 2008, Mab (1193) wrote:
  
  wow..I need a cold shower after this..sexy!
  
  
• On Thursday, April 24, 2008, siGht in toucH (448) wrote:
  
  i dig this, intense and very hot -symph-
  
  
• On Thursday, April 24, 2008, MoonishBunny (720) wrote:
  
  ^_^ i likes it.