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How Does A Dark Poet Write Happiness? by Adam
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How Does A Dark Poet Write Happiness?

~ Adam ~

When I’m happy
When I’m not down

When I’m glad
When I can not frown

When I leave the tears behind
When I believe in mankind

When it’s not dark
When I feel smart

When life’s good
When all goes as it should

When life is a game
When there is no more shame



How do I write
My emotions tonight?

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  • Malcholm Dark On Friday, December 10, 2010, Malcholm Dark (1200) wrote:

    you certainly can write up-beat... great style... wish there were more like it being written...peace

     
  • Dilated View On Saturday, January 2, 2010, Dilated View (539) wrote:

    I think these are the rare moments when you just gotta kick back and enjoy because it always seems like the eye of the storm and you never know how long it's ganna last. An nicely lighthearted read, well done :)

     
  • A former member wrote: Let your words flow...very nice.

     
  • Insanity Issues On Monday, April 7, 2008, Insanity Issues (739) wrote:

    Damn, Wow, I like how you ended with a hypothetical question. Its so simple yet, it makes so much since. Nice write. ][ ][

     
  • unspeakable truth On Friday, March 28, 2008, unspeakable truth (113) wrote:

    I agree with Nike, everyones definition of dark is differentand I am not so sure once we pick up the pencil or start tapping the keys if we can set something a certain way. Just be you, allow yourself to flow in the wordsforget there is an audience, dont worry what anyone would think as that can hold one back. Let your heart free! Scholar

     
  • Alanarchy On Tuesday, March 18, 2008, Alanarchy (1210) wrote:

    Try not writing about yourself. Try writing from another's perspective, or from an object's persepective. Or about an object or person. It doesn't matter. I don't really even consider myself, or most of my favorite writers on here dark poets, or any kind of poets. Just expressive people. There are no boxes. haha, I don't know if you were being rhetorical or not. Either way, great write, and I know exactly what you mean.

     
  • denver nitze On Tuesday, March 18, 2008, denver nitze (301) wrote:

    poetly?

     
  • denver nitze On Tuesday, March 18, 2008, denver nitze (301) wrote:

    ok i had to be funny for a second. this is good. a common feeling fetl by many 'dark' poets. i guess unfortunately however 'dark' life might be there are always 'light' spots. write, just write, what ever you feel. very nice write. ~ta~

     
  • denver nitze On Tuesday, March 18, 2008, denver nitze (301) wrote:

    felt*

     
  • A former member wrote: Writing happiness is a scary thought...the minute you say/write it and start to believe it....it's probably already falling apart....(i know i know....boooooo....grim spectre of death....boooooo)

     
  • elisa On Tuesday, March 18, 2008, elisa (1817) wrote:

    ...if i knew ... i wouldn't be gnawing on my brain tonight. interesting.

     
  • elisa On Tuesday, March 18, 2008, elisa (1817) wrote:

    i'm struggling to write palatable overwhelming disgust.

     

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