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reborn to love you again, and again by GoldenLotus
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reborn to love you again, and again

~ GoldenLotus ~

love me till the stars in your universe die
lie by my side as we decay into infinity
smear my ashes upon your lips
in your favorite color lipstick
you loved to kiss

when i’m gone, if before your last breath,
by your side i’ll haunt
till the day of your death

love me more tonight than this morning
lie by my side as we rot into eternity
smear your ashes upon(what’s left of me)
the memories of what we'll forever be

death cannot part our soul
i enter no where without you ,if love my only sin,
reborn only to find you again

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  • MorbosisAngel On Thursday, June 25, 2009, MorbosisAngel (13) wrote:

    Very beautiful

  • Mylissa On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, Mylissa (1128) wrote:

    simple and lovely.

  • Bella Butchery On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, Bella Butchery (947) wrote:

    *would die to hear words like this

  • GoldenLotus On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus (39) wrote:

    i've died over and over to love like this again...glad you liked it bella!

  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1550) wrote:

    Agreed

  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1550) wrote:

    Ending was realy superp. I'm glad I read this. *Makes a mental note *GoldenLotus* *

  • GoldenLotus On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus (39) wrote:

    always a pleasure monkey...to have comments from you!

  • RubyXero On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, RubyXero (525) wrote:

    lovely write. i loved the line... "smear my ashes upon your lips"...beautiful. this was beautiful. the last line was a perfect ending.

  • GoldenLotus On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus (39) wrote:

    thanks for the awesome comment!

  • denver nitze On Tuesday, February 26, 2008, denver nitze (410) wrote:

    you should offer kleenex with this. *sniffs* beautifully put.

  • zanewill On Tuesday, February 26, 2008, zanewill (101) wrote:

    excellent!!! makes me sad. i lost my love but it never leaves>>>

  • i tremble On Tuesday, February 26, 2008, i tremble (34) wrote:

    amazing.

  • GoldenLotus On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus (39) wrote:

    thanks...glad you liked!


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