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tragic elitism ['08] by chrome arctic
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tragic elitism ['08]

~ chrome arctic ~

We know of nothing
But have lived everything
We can’t explain it,
Or care to even waste our time
We are not immoral
But don’t covet devotion
I can’t frame thoughts quicker.
Then you pull them from walls

I don’t care for tragic elitism
Or any of your points of view

We speak in image
Simplistically obscure
We can’t translate it
You either feel it or not at all
We keep recall behind doors
Their nails scratch the other side
We won’t disclose intention
We’re certain to push away

I Don’t want displaced aggression
Or what you think of my soul

© 2008 chrome arctic
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  • A former member wrote: nice... I like it. esp the nails scratching on the other side....

  • urbanhumility On Saturday, February 16, 2008, urbanhumility (1350) wrote:

    brilliant in its urban delivery.....intelligent and sharp

  • Distorted_Reality On Saturday, February 16, 2008, Distorted_Reality (146) wrote:

    Nice train of thought. like the description, but the ending was a kinda weak. It didn't even really seem as if it did end. Idk I have a weird perception...I'm sure others will think the ending to be just fine...all in all...nice job.


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