three times three

I am concretely composed of
Complete thoughts wrought with
Selfish praise, a maze amazing for
One so taken by flattery.

I am so sickly sincere I cant
Keep a leash on my heartbound hydra
I cant get a grip of my
Hellsend sex goddess segue

Send me souls to burn in place
Of a face time or race chime in
Climb in, far from
Hymen held wholly holey here
Dearly, a tear for sheer
Talent, declined.

I’m undermined

My competition a petition self served

My heart takes the path less traveled daily
My heart doesn’t bruise, in spite of the melee

Excuse the blatant overexposure
Refuse the statement.

I hate myself

I love it.

I attack myself above it, and all the while
Smile
I control the uncontrollable
I console the, you know the rest,
I believe the best, thoughts,
are this wet with conflict.

• On Friday, April 11, 2008, MoonishBunny (718) wrote:
  
  O_o awesmoness ^_^
  
  
• On Monday, March 10, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1550) wrote:
  
  God you are a fantastic writer. I wonder exactly how your mind works. I dont think I'd be scared to know
  
  
• On Monday, February 4, 2008, sIo (794) wrote:
  
  agressive....and hard to believe but believable at the same time. this is different from your normal heartenings....
  
  
• On Sunday, February 3, 2008, The Prophet Untold (522) wrote:
  
  This spun my mind like a indoor carnival ride, then spat me out against concrete walls. Very well thought and conceived. Another victory, sir. +tpu+
  
  
• On Friday, February 1, 2008, Alanarchy (1483) wrote:
  
  This is something to be proud of. I admire this. To be honest, I wish I'd written it. Write the hell on.
  
  
• On Wednesday, January 30, 2008, glasshouse (697) wrote:
  
  Damn. Beautiful tangles and tugs of war. Your words do intertwine in complicated and cryptic ways and then you write something so fucking telling. Its a refreshing change of pace from the pompous wordsmithing that often comes these days. I adored this piece of poetry because it was true. and I'm sorry. --Jes
  
  
• On Wednesday, January 30, 2008, glasshouse (697) wrote:
  
  And you know what comes next... *clicks button* I can't get over this one. --Jes
  
  
• On Wednesday, January 30, 2008, raskal (213) wrote:
  
  Love the way your words knot and jumble in the first 3 stanzas. It's a bit of a head-f***, but works brilliantly
  
  
• On Tuesday, January 29, 2008, Dommi (109) wrote:
  
  you've never ceased to amaze me, dave :)
  
  
• On Tuesday, January 29, 2008, Niemand (549) wrote:
  
  Third stanza was my FAR my favorite... Good meter, good beat, all in all, I love it...-Geisha