common orbits

every sick glitch can have it's need
you learn fast or not at all
it slows the time down
between breathing and the instant
dangerous valentines
repeat the path of common orbits
the last bad idea

dead eyes swollen from reflective light
all of known information
does no good at all
the pulse is a dangerous idea
loosely strung out moments
an obstructed, bad angled view down
it means little now

• On Tuesday, January 1, 2008, Mari (529) wrote:
  
  hm. well that's a little thought provoking
  
  
• On Monday, November 26, 2007, raskal (213) wrote:
  
  nice write -edgy, abstract and original.