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Her

~ Bloodofdeadpoets ~

She tortures my soul with the lust in her eyes

And every man’s goal is to be with her so hard he tries

Just to hear her voice many men would give their lives

So in dying they still lose for their goal is never realized

Many men have died for her but she still does not care

Because her heart is stone so she cant shed a single tear

She lives everyday wishing for her life to come to an end

Because she has many lovers but what she wants is a friend

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  • tcdlive On Wednesday, December 26, 2012, tcdlive (11) wrote:

    you write the truth, some don't notice such things

     
  • A former member wrote: a nice way to end a poem, very climactic and to end it that way was perfection to the point.

     
  • A former member wrote: wow the end caught me off guard...i loved it...good write.

     
  • A former member wrote: fantastic. I love the ending. It was unexpected.

     
  • xserratedsoulx On Tuesday, February 12, 2008, xserratedsoulx (223) wrote:

    i empathize. more true and sad than anything else.

     
  • Enigma On Wednesday, April 4, 2007, Enigma (103) wrote:

    THIS IS ANOTHER GOOD WRITE...

     
  • A former member wrote: its sad, but i know people who are similer. great write, you really captured it without going overboard.

     
  • prettydisgrace On Wednesday, February 28, 2007, prettydisgrace (101) wrote:

    this is a great write, very touching

     
  • A former member wrote: im in love with this! nice write ~*raven*~

     
  • Sticky Kitty On Wednesday, August 3, 2005, Sticky Kitty (265) wrote:

    i agree, this was honest with a slap in the face at end. -kitty

     
  • Butterfly On Wednesday, July 13, 2005, Butterfly (105) wrote:

    Wow this poem just kind of tears at your heart a little bit now doesn't it. So sad. Loved it.

     
  • A former member wrote: So brutally honest, yet still symphathetic towards the empty shell of a soul. bravo

     
  • A former member wrote: awesome, and so god damn true!

     
  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Sunday, September 5, 2004, CorruptedLittleGirl (269) wrote:

    After reading this again, I feel I must comment again and tell you how incredible this poem is. So true. You are amazing.

     
  • Beautiful Scars On Saturday, June 5, 2004, Beautiful Scars (211) wrote:

    Damn, this is painfully true for some. exellent write. ..::Rage::...

     
  • A former member wrote: wow, if I don't know better, I'd think you were writing about me (dont mean to sound conceited, its just, so many live their life that way)

     
  • murder_in_clubland On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, murder_in_clubland (441) wrote:

    this sent shivers uop and down my spine ...this is sad i know the feeling of longing~ss

     
  • Cwn Annwn On Tuesday, February 3, 2004, Cwn Annwn (95) wrote:

    Nice write...I love this write! It's so true and amazing!~GoNe~

     
  • SilentStalker On Friday, September 26, 2003, SilentStalker (1201) wrote:

    I see this happen everyday...we men never get the hint right away...do we... Scholar

     
  • A former member wrote: wow....-speechless- Scholar

     
  • hate_doll On Wednesday, May 21, 2003, hate_doll (276) wrote:

    beautiful, touching peace. isn't what everyone's looking for? Just a friend...? great work...(!)

     
  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Monday, May 5, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (269) wrote:

    Wow, this is a truly amazing piece. You are one of my favorite poets on this site. You have talent!

     
  • liquid_emotion On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, liquid_emotion (362) wrote:

    O... my... god. It's like ... you just... i think... You read my mind, saw inside me, wrote what i couldn't bear.

     
  • Bloodofdeadpoets On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (59) wrote:

    thanks for the comments, im glad i could write what you couldnt bear liquid thanks for your comment it's greatly appreciated

     
  • liquid_emotion On Friday, May 2, 2003, liquid_emotion (362) wrote:

    no darling, YOU are greatly appreciated:)

     
  • A former member wrote: Fucking Awesome! another great piece!

     

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