cybersex christmas

grain by grain you
strip me nude nearly
driven to beg
static cling brings me anti animal age defiant skin
silk soft like dream film reels bind
mind seducing whisper tendrils drenched in
burgundy like a
melodrama broken record reprise
like a
melted snowflake dewdrop sea
cruise with me.

Our prelude was transcribing
word by word
telegraphic mesmorizing
flitting fingers
flowing cello mellow yellow
to deep dawn carnival
bright
until I plead parasol
slim the
light
like a bug
you glow in amber
wear you chained
across my curves
lets ramble

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Collab by Liz and I, 10 words to weave each,

his: age, silk, bind, dew, cruise, flake, whisper, grain, burgundy, nude

hers: telegraph, cello, plead, prelude, carnival, slim, dawn, curve, parasol, amber

• On Sunday, May 18, 2008, MoonishBunny (720) wrote:
  
  i like it. it winds like corkscrews through images i love this.
  
  
• On Friday, November 23, 2007, Err0r (451) wrote:
  
  Very clever Mister Jack Of All Trades.
  
  
• On Thursday, November 22, 2007, glasshouse (697) wrote:
  
  I dig the kind of matter-of-factness that is brought with the harshness of the words. The consonants. I'm not saying this was intentional but I certainly read it. Its an interesting experiment and I would call it an overall success. Dug.--Jes
  
  
• On Sunday, November 18, 2007, sIo (793) wrote:
  
  i don't like it.
  
  
• On Wednesday, December 5, 2007, Liz (339) wrote:
  
  i do
  
  
• On Sunday, November 11, 2007, Evil (425) wrote:
  
  amazing
  
  
• A former member wrote: i like it
  
  
• On Thursday, November 8, 2007, Alanarchy (1483) wrote:
  
  I'm all smiles. Excellent collab. And it looks like it was fun to write. Rocka and roll.
  
  
• On Thursday, November 8, 2007, carlosjackal (1799) wrote:
  
  Now read our co-write, Dave ;)
  
  
• On Thursday, November 8, 2007, Niemand (549) wrote:
  
  Wow... Awesome, the title is what drew me in *grins*.-Airi
  
  
• On Thursday, November 8, 2007, carlosjackal (1799) wrote:
  
  =) Crazy wordplay co-write madness. Enjoyed this one. -Carl