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con artist. by King_Crazy_Dave
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con artist.

~ King_Crazy_Dave ~

Symbolism soaked in the
Same sense a circular see-saw makes,
My peers vomit language, word-nauseous from
Vague plagues art caught from some lazy
Perception plan playing hot for genius
Genuine undone under 'miss my point muse'

Any nobody can cross dress nothing and
Ink their canvas coarse with a new beat
to lay on dead horses,
abstract stable enabled surrealist sewage


Break your half empty glass of turpentine
Pompous pessimist, pouring watercolor thin rivers
Of once honest oil out over listless liars
Whose hues prove pathologically colorblind
Besides, Black and white are blight
Your words are waste
Con artist

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  • colorapathy On Friday, April 25, 2008, colorapathy (59) wrote:

    I wrote something along the same idea, but I think somehow you got the better of it. Interesting, intense..

  • glasshouse On Thursday, November 22, 2007, glasshouse (697) wrote:

    Aren't we all. An accusing glimpse from a rather unmerciful vantage point. But it can certainly be easily defended since we're often much too merciful concerning dishonesty in whatever form. It took a few reads but I like the words you chose and how you placed them. --Jes

  • sIo On Sunday, November 18, 2007, sIo (793) wrote:

    i feel guilty...is all i have in response.

  • Liz On Thursday, November 8, 2007, Liz (339) wrote:

    gee dave, this is almost as awesome as your hot shaft. yeppers

  • Alanarchy On Tuesday, November 6, 2007, Alanarchy (1483) wrote:

    Scathing, and hot blooded. With some amazing turns of phrase. That first section is unforgiving and it doesn't let go. Write on.

  • Nill On Monday, November 5, 2007, Nill (133) wrote:

    Yeah it is hard to make anything new.....Liked it. Especially that you captured that point fairly well.

  • Evil On Monday, November 5, 2007, Evil (425) wrote:

    dave dave dave. :)

  • elisa On Monday, November 5, 2007, elisa (1891) wrote:

    the sound of silence ...reaped from the conscience of a con artist......love it.

  • carlosjackal On Monday, November 5, 2007, carlosjackal (1799) wrote:

    This delivered blow after blow against poetry that is empty but dressed up to look clever and "insightful". Excelent :) -Carl


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