identified

i identify with implied pride
i'm told i confide in the
head of the enemy of the state,
money grubbing trash taught
no god, under god,
under fear of relevance plus penalty of deadpan definition.
free as a loud bird in bedroom communities
raised on emotional hypochondria, caffeine, and
you can't say that word and
you can't blame that man.

i identify with implied insincerity
color me confused when white is red
in the blue decade my sun tan quit
burning the brown man.
offense or no offense i only
relate to my forefathers through egocentricity
and it figures its implied i
identify with every color i insult,
the truest white stereotype is based
in irony.

staight faced in a town full of
curvy roads
i am bound to get lost in some
culture cul de sac
without the money to live somewhere
i'm not
supposed to feel sorry
so i identify with whats implied silently
because my words are better spent on
sharing something someone else isnt
already spray painting to my social walls.

• A former member wrote: I would say nice work other than the thought that you are not the orginal artist, So do you often copy other people(s) work as your own?
  
  
• On Tuesday, October 23, 2007, carlosjackal (1799) wrote:
  
  Hehe..this coming from the person who's had 5 comments removed.
  
  
• On Monday, October 8, 2007, Sharon Rose (625) wrote:
  
  back it up with a citation, please.
  
  
• On Monday, October 8, 2007, King_Crazy_Dave (357) wrote:
  
  oh all the time man. you should maybe report me to DarkPoet so i can get banned for all the crazy things i plagiarize
  
  
• On Monday, October 8, 2007, Instant Insanity (657) wrote:
  
  PLAGARIZER!! Your going to jail! Or Hell, which ever one comes first. ][ ][
  
  
• On Monday, October 8, 2007, King_Crazy_Dave (357) wrote:
  
  you really caught me red handed here, so, i mean, jeez. oh right. who did i copy again?
  
  
• On Monday, October 8, 2007, King_Crazy_Dave (357) wrote:
  
  seems like no one. I guess you should get fucked or something then.
  
  
• On Monday, October 8, 2007, glasshouse (697) wrote:
  
  *applauds* unfounded, much?
  
  
• On Sunday, October 7, 2007, Instant Insanity (657) wrote:
  
  "identify with implied insincerity" nicely said ][ ][
  
  
• On Saturday, September 29, 2007, Lydia Jade (1047) wrote:
  
  Very fast pace, enoyable to read in all its ironic factual relatability. Easy enough to be understood by anyone who isn't a machine...In one way or another. _In jade we trust_ Much love.
  
  
• On Friday, September 21, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1550) wrote:
  
  I dont know what to comment. But I can tell you that I have read this ten times allready.
  
  
• On Friday, September 21, 2007, Evil (425) wrote:
  
  grasping for strings.
  
  
• On Thursday, September 20, 2007, Preacher X (39) wrote:
  
  It's a bit hard to follow but that could be the exhaustion. Regardless you captured alot of intrinsic points of todays seeming society. Good write.
  
  
• On Wednesday, September 19, 2007, sIo (793) wrote:
  
  honestly, i don't like this at all.
  
  
• On Wednesday, September 19, 2007, glasshouse (697) wrote:
  
  I really love the way this came out. It takes a couple reads, I stumble through the first few. But hidden under the surface is a great message. Well put. I especially like the last stanza. You've done it. Good luck. --Jes
  
  
• On Wednesday, September 19, 2007, Alanarchy (1483) wrote:
  
  Cols right. There's something fresh in the way you speak the words. "Free as a loud bird in bedroom communities" Awesome.
  
  
• On Wednesday, September 19, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2209) wrote:
  
  an excellent topical allusion to the cultures that parameter us...the perimeters of ignorance and distrust; the colour-bound stereotypes and the state of control...worded in a unique and intelliget fashion, a diamond in the ruff
  
  
• On Wednesday, September 19, 2007, carlosjackal (1799) wrote:
  
  *awe-struck*