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glasses. by King_Crazy_Dave
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glasses.

~ King_Crazy_Dave ~

sheets of stained glass graphite
houndstooth zipper coated
lace and
faux pleather polka dots

buttoned stitching string twined
and taut timeless
around our flesh


denim ashes and cigarettes.

© 2007 King_Crazy_Dave
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  • Lydia Jade On Saturday, September 29, 2007, Lydia Jade (1047) wrote:

    If there was a point to this, it evades me...But in its own twisted little way its captivating, because it keeps me wondering what the hell is going on here...and if im just to stupid to grasp this

  • Lydia Jade On Saturday, September 29, 2007, Lydia Jade (1047) wrote:

    or if there isnt a point really, just emotional relation to word...or if just wanted people to wonder one way or another...oh yes im on to your evil plot!!! much love

  • Dancing_Monkey On Saturday, September 15, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1550) wrote:

    This should have more comments. I return and read this a few times a week. It sure is splendid work

  • Bella Butchery On Thursday, September 6, 2007, Bella Butchery (947) wrote:

    captivating

  • sIo On Thursday, September 6, 2007, sIo (793) wrote:

    sounds like someone fucked the 80's.

  • The Prophet Untold On Tuesday, September 4, 2007, The Prophet Untold (523) wrote:

    You suck harder than a kirby. Or not. Better than taco bell for sure.+tpu+

  • Army Barbie On Tuesday, August 28, 2007, Army Barbie (395) wrote:

    Can't understand why you whored this to me, asshole. But it's great. I like cigarettes.

  • GraveFlower On Sunday, August 26, 2007, GraveFlower (295) wrote:

    woah......why are the good ones such assholes

  • Evil On Sunday, August 26, 2007, Evil (425) wrote:

    you're wonderful.

  • Railway_Butterfly On Sunday, August 26, 2007, Railway_Butterfly (411) wrote:

    ooh this is lovely. simple and tight. i appriciate the title.. good stuff :)

  • Dommi On Sunday, August 26, 2007, Dommi (109) wrote:

    I revel in your wordings *nod*

  • saintedmad On Sunday, August 26, 2007, saintedmad (1424) wrote:

    makes me want to string all these together and form the bones of a real live boy. .. . marvelous~ nessa

  • Preacher X On Saturday, August 25, 2007, Preacher X (39) wrote:

    you never fail to amaze dave. for some reason I had a Fear and Loathing moment when reading this.

  • Alanarchy On Saturday, August 25, 2007, Alanarchy (1483) wrote:

    I see a snapshot of moments in hindsight, old rusty memories... This is an inkblot test. Cool.

  • glasshouse On Saturday, August 25, 2007, glasshouse (697) wrote:

    Hmmm.....

  • Dancing_Monkey On Saturday, August 25, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1550) wrote:

    Brilliantly structured, gave me a sense of trashy love and youth.

  • Err0r On Saturday, August 25, 2007, Err0r (451) wrote:

    sounds like the shortest song ever written. I love it though, abstract, yet structured.

  • A former member wrote: complex and simple.. a whirlwind of energy. magnificent.


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