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A Monet Sky by liquid_emotion
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A Monet Sky

By liquid_emotion

Streaks of white light and pink
Against the blue of your eyes
And I don’t remember your voice
Or recall whether or not I love you
I pulled away from your world
And then forgot to tell you why
Left in the emptiness I am filling
Dumping out and filling again
Nothing feels right in my thoughts
And still I cannot bring myself
To let you deep inside a secret
That won’t whisper through
Plastic letters and dim lit screens
So I slip away quietly unnoticed
And pretend you left me here

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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Wednesday, April 23, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • shadowsinthelight On Friday, April 25, 2003, shadowsinthelight (170) wrote:

    All the above, S.

     
  • Bast On Thursday, April 24, 2003, Bast (781) wrote:

    brilliantly done.

     
  • DoctorAsh On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, DoctorAsh (409) wrote:

    a nerve ending poked .. nicely done

     
  • liquid_emotion On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, liquid_emotion (362) wrote:

    well, that doesn't sound soothing:)

     
  • A former member wrote: WOW! i love this too good write liquid

     
  • SnowQueen On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, SnowQueen (59) wrote:

    I love this.

     
  • Jonas On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, Jonas (776) wrote:

    sneaky and kinda cubist... in the mind... i dunno, sometimes it's hard to describe what words do to me... these are lukewarm words, and they feel like they should be.

     
  • liquid_emotion On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, liquid_emotion (362) wrote:

    damn right!

     
  • Six-Out On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, Six-Out (1513) wrote:

    Very nice. Of course I love all of your work liquid. You never cease to make me smile. Or sad, whichever way the poem is written, or um....you get what I mean.

     

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