Dark Poetry - Proudly Publishing Poems Prose And People's Priceless Poetry
[Get Full Access & Your Own Profile: Join For Free]
that feeling? by GoldenLotus
dark Poetry
dark Poetry

that feeling?

~ GoldenLotus ~

do you ever get the feeling
that life hates you
in the cruel moment that sanity
is shaken from your grip

thieves and liars
never tasted so sweet
so sweet the revenge
with every sip

do you ever get the feeling
that life has no justice
that the meanings that we create
and the truths that we tell ourselves

only replicate
lies already told

violation never hurt so good
and the tears swelling up in my eyes
never felt so empty

stolen
my passion
silenced
my pictures

freezing the frame
just take me back to that day

© 2007 JuNGaLiSTMiSTReSS
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Tags

Comments on "that feeling?"

Log in to post comments.
  • A former member wrote: *In the cruel moment that sanity is shaken from your grip* That crippled me doll...This is raw.. ~OttO~

  • GoldenLotus On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus (39) wrote:

    my pleasure to cripple you...ty, for your comment.

  • lajeeves On Wednesday, August 29, 2007, lajeeves (66) wrote:

    Ive felt this! but have you ever got the feeling so true and blesed as love and trust and compassion and faith. this I now feel each day, and life is good

  • GoldenLotus On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus (39) wrote:

    i have...i do...this was inspired by getting my camera stolen out of my car...it was my medium for most of my creativity..and they stole it, damn them.

  • deadrosesrdust On Thursday, August 2, 2007, deadrosesrdust (115) wrote:

    nice work. enjoyed the sentiment. i always liked seeing things from anothers perception

  • GoldenLotus On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus (39) wrote:

    ty:)

  • Bella Butchery On Thursday, August 2, 2007, Bella Butchery (947) wrote:

    my daily routine... well, well put


How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2010 GeniusWeb.com LLC
[Join (free)]    [Poetry Site]    [Read Poems]    [More Poets]    [Terms & Privacy]