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Burnt Halos by Disassembly Boy
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Burnt Halos

~ Disassembly Boy ~

I can't deny
that look in your eyes...
like Jesus..
Something that follows me down
and lays me flat out..
stretched across your splintered beams
but
I never really found salvation..
Even when the nails kept pounding
and you still kept screaming for truth.
Trying to get the demons out.
My lies.
My insanity..
.. the failure
of my humanity.
I dig deep to find the answers
but I know there's nothing there..
that all that lies within
is just that of me...
Strangled cords and a split personality..
the boy that I could never be...
but you're still burning halos into my skin
trying to find the light in me...


© 2007 Disassembly Boy Kevin N.
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  • Tania On Friday, July 27, 2007, Tania (235) wrote:

    yes.. those last two lines.. very, very beautiful.. glad to see you again love.:)

  • Mylissa On Thursday, July 26, 2007, Mylissa (1128) wrote:

    and the pic on your profile...seductively beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: Liked it alot, Nice job:)

  • A former member wrote: So deep and meaningful. Glad to see you posting again

  • Alanarchy On Thursday, July 26, 2007, Alanarchy (1483) wrote:

    "But you're still burning halos into my skin trying to find the light in me..." Great stuff.

  • Aunty Depressant On Thursday, July 26, 2007, Aunty Depressant (549) wrote:

    Oh the quest for deepness, ...ironically this is deep ;P

  • Mab On Thursday, July 26, 2007, Mab (1193) wrote:

    I love this to death...

  • Mylissa On Thursday, July 26, 2007, Mylissa (1128) wrote:

    I am so happy to see you post again, this was simply stunning. I agree with Cloud. ...bravo.

  • Bella Butchery On Thursday, July 26, 2007, Bella Butchery (947) wrote:

    you. make. me. want. to. die... bravo.


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