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twenty.nine candles
sit on top of a cake
this can't be happening
it must be a mistake

twenty.nine years
and countless tears

stacked on a cake
to make it
a
bit


sweet...er?


and twenty.nine
heart.aches

and

twenty.nine
loves

all lost in a moment

all gone in a breathe

as they...





dwindle.



dance.


gasp.




shudder.



and


.die.


and in the
dark.ness


life





has









gone
.
.
.















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On Friday July 11th, 2008, saintedmad (1148) writes:
be; just be.............>


On Wednesday July 9th, 2008, wilted (307) writes:
Lovely. So few words come to mind. Hold on, you're cherished. And happy birthday!


On Wednesday July 9th, 2008, tangeled (482) writes:
thank you lovey. you always cheer me up. :D ~ta~


On Wednesday July 9th, 2008, After hours (622) writes:
Don't you dare, i'm handing you a pocket full of candles....now make a wish, keep well ta~


On Wednesday July 9th, 2008, tangeled (482) writes:
believe me i'm tryin. i don't want to be blown out either. :) thanks for being so fuckin awesome. ~ta~


On Tuesday July 8th, 2008, Ainsof (1860) writes:
luckily for the world... beauty has been deepened, brightened, increased and given life, the word itself has found new bounds, all because of these 29 years... and this world will be so much less *lights a candle* you share this day (tenth?) with my nephew... and now I know happysad... thanks for being you *sends all the strength of love*


On Tuesday July 8th, 2008, tangeled (482) writes:
yes the tenth is my day. thank you for your sweet comment. :) ~ta~



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