DarkPoetry -|- Sentient Ignorance -|- Click, click, boom.

Click, click, boom.

Five empty chambers, one filled with hate
tell me you love me, before it's too late
Click...
she loves me, i'm still here today
Click...
she loves me, but why didn't she stay
Click...
she loves me, this trigger's so heavy
Click...
she loves me, with you my heart beats steady
Click...
she loves me, there's nothing to say
Boom...
she loves me not, it's better this way

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On Friday October 14th, 2005, Mistress Shadow (382) writes:

good job; powerful and to the point . ~T~

On Thursday October 13th, 2005, Rone4611 (156) writes:

I was going to make fun of you for using the Saliva song title, but I don't have the heart. This was absolutly moving. Excellent job!!

On Friday October 14th, 2005, Sentient Ignorance (35) writes:

Thanks for not, i try to be original with what i can. But sometimes titles overlap.

On Thursday October 13th, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1048) writes:

Oh god...this is so very emotional...I could hear every click of the chamber as your finger pulled back the trigger...if only the guns of our hearts could keep our fingers from falling...love would be better that way. Nice write. *Evangel*

On Thursday October 13th, 2005, An Expired Member (43) writes:

this is a very powerfull poem i liked it alot good job

On Thursday October 13th, 2005, An Expired Member (6) writes:

loved it...great writing style!

On Thursday October 13th, 2005, riverdreams (7) writes:

Wow. Great rising action! Good flow and dramatic. Good write!

On Thursday October 13th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (317) writes:

beautifully creative -kitty

On Thursday October 13th, 2005, Alec Pure (332) writes:

wow this was really really good i loved the way it was written great stuff here

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