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Heart attack

Why do i still care
we were over long ago
why do these tears fall
i knew
it was only
a matter of time
before i was
alone again
as my lip trembles
i clench my teeth
repressing my feelings

I love you

running to the house
i forgot
i didn't wave
i didn't wish you well
i ran to my room
Mr. bear hugged me
his lifeless eyes
more comfort than anyone
burrying my face
I cant see anymore
these tears have clogged my heart

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On Sunday August 21st, 2005, Sentient Ignorance (35) writes:

ya, i read it first, but it's more of a personal poem than one that makes sense to others, ya know what i mean?

On Sunday August 21st, 2005, suicideseason (2128) writes:

Your obsession with this teddy bear concerns me...chicks are much softer.Trust the Reverend.

On Sunday September 11th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (315) writes:

I love you, Mr. Season.

On Sunday August 21st, 2005, glasshouse (780) writes:

"Mr. Bear hugged me"? -Glass

On Sunday August 21st, 2005, Unbridled Pain (65) writes:

was this a quick write? did you read it first to make sure it made sense? you can do better, I know so. - U.P.

On Sunday August 21st, 2005, Six-Out (1820) writes:

It's too scattered. You were on a strait line while throwing rocks at things that didn't exist. Almost good, but pretty much not.

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