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"A child's prayer" by Sentient Ignorance

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Heavenly father,
are you really there,
and did you hear and ignore my last prayer
It feels to me heaven is far away
and that your gone, but I am still ok
Heavenly father, I remember now
something that Jesus told disciples long ago
suffer the children to come to me,
Father in prayer I'm coming now to thee

Heavenly father,
I dont think it's fair
why should the good die lonely, while the evil pair
making more hatred for all of us
causing the innocent to lie and cuss
Heavenly father, I can feel it now
something that was promised by you long ago
a heavenly body is holding me,
Father in prayer i'm coming now to thee

Heavenly father,
I can feel you there,
I know you listen and remember every single prayer
but why will this pain not go away
is it eternal, if so that's ok
Heavenly father, I think I know it now
remember when you held me oh so long ago
It's hard but it's worth it, as you will see
Father I'm coming now on bended knee.



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On Thursday July 28th, 2005, stormtalk (884) writes:
"Heavenly father,/ I dont think it's fair/ why should the good die lonely, while the evil pair." Youch. Nice write.


On Thursday July 28th, 2005, Sentient Ignorance (35) writes:
I am LDS and this is one of my favorite childrens hymns. i changed it because i know i still feel this way alot, and other people do too.


On Thursday July 28th, 2005, peril_notion (123) writes:
Religion isn't really my calling, but that will NOT stop me from commending you on a job greatly done. ~Heather


On Thursday July 28th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (757) writes:
Such a strong prayer. With a tint of sadness, it touched my heart. Great write ~*~tart~*~


On Thursday July 28th, 2005, Lydia Jade (784) writes:
The flow is good, but im not a religious type person so i dont really relate...but its well written



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