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Say goodbye, say goodnight

The clouds torment me
Chugging and busting
Like a freight train
Vigorously pouring
Mocking me

Exerting that ominous feeling
So familiar in essence
Looking like that suburban pollution
Yet only found deep inside of me

And I envy the clouds
They aren’t afraid to pour
Yet pour gracefully
With thunder and lightning
Demonstrating the emotion

Yet mine is silent
Unknown, unnoticed
It isn’t powerful
And so far from graceful

It’s meek, weak
Like an arm gone numb
You can barely feel it tingle

So I

Say goodbye, say goodnight





...please excuse my while i drown in my own customized, personal hell...



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On Thursday June 8th, 2006, heartdripsblack (768) writes:
very well done here. i liked it a lot


On Saturday June 3rd, 2006, evolve (2195) writes:
.."It’s meek, weak/Like an arm gone numb/You can barely feel it tingle"..creaky, grey write. Until those last lines..


On Saturday June 3rd, 2006, evolve (2195) writes:
..they were an unexpected plunge into excruciating depths of one own's "Hell".. no chance of return. Some pivotal thoughts traced here. Thank you.


On Saturday May 27th, 2006, cucuio (212) writes:
~hugs tight~ No personalized hells to drown in. Yours is not silent or unnoticed, its not not powerful, and it IS graceful. ~hugs again~ Smile!


On Friday May 26th, 2006, gbuff69 (214) writes:
your imagery is really beautiful


On Friday May 26th, 2006, blue (1764) writes:
grr, like a knife in the dark, this stuck deep. Incisive. Loved the last stanza/lines! ~b



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