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Can you see?
The empty shards of glass
That are also known as eyes

Can you see through them?
Or are they so filled with pain and sorrow
That they form clouds of darkness
Making you unable to see inside?

Do you see when the fire rages?
When it gets so painfully hot and unbearable
That the fire melts the broken shards of glass
And …
When the melted glass rolls down my face,
Do you see just how much it stings?
Can you feel it?
Can you feel it ring?

Do you know how much the fire burns inside?
Do you know just how much strength it takes to hide?
To keep it from crossing the deadly line

You say I'm cold, apathetic
Oh, if only you could FEEL the fire
That burns bright and leaves me feeling nothing
But, emptiness and loneliness
It leaves me powerless

So, can you see?
Or are you blind?



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On Sunday October 29th, 2006, An Expired Member (44) writes:
very nice job


On Saturday June 3rd, 2006, vaultgrl (239) writes:
....this is amazing.....only way i know to describe it....feels so familiar too...great job.....


On Sunday May 28th, 2006, weyvern (105) writes:
love it its so powerfull


On Sunday March 19th, 2006, heartdripsblack (769) writes:
wonderfully written


On Sunday March 5th, 2006, ABIGAIL (7) writes:
beautiful, you are definetly not a failure...abby


On Sunday January 1st, 2006, An Expired Member (4) writes:
u got a gift


On Tuesday August 23rd, 2005, blue (1780) writes:
Your answer would be no, most people cannot/will not see past themselves.. most enjoyed, thank you. ~b


On Tuesday August 23rd, 2005, abattoir (151) writes:
you painted this like a master..I loved it.


On Sunday August 7th, 2005, island warrior (306) writes:
Excellent piece.


On Sunday August 7th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1259) writes:
this is extremely well done, I must say. You have quite a talent. This just burns with emotion!


On Tuesday June 7th, 2005, ShardsofSilence (347) writes:
like i said before...this is a beautiful write! ^_^


On Tuesday June 7th, 2005, Serenity (603) writes:
Wow, great write!



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