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we're standing at the end of the bar
paired with mirroring glasses:
2x warm-honey whiskey for her,
2x bitter-burn vodka for me,
_(she's fierce
_i'm transparent,
_we drink to our personalities)
but without ice.


nothing stays long in the glass, anyway.


there's smoke and intangible haziness
and we christen the evening
to the thrumming guitar
of counting crows,
chat with the the bartender
who recognized us each night
who didn't ask about the ice
whose name was john-with-an-h,
confirming for us the fact
there's just some places
you're meant to be.





an old man at the bar
gives lauren a hard time about her
retro-trend shirt with the
reproduced flyer advertising bob dylan,
asks her if she can quote a line
or sing a song back to him

which she can't.

i can't either
and though we've both read his poetry
--that tarantula mess--
we don't bother to mention it


i can hear the old guy's voice
purling in my head,
heavy with ireland and weariness
that floated along his surface
like the foam on his beer:

"damn kids."






i couldn't help but worry
we'd be the last disappointment
in his life,
two young regular somethings
burning out their throats
in an attempt to scorch their hearts
and feel anything.












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On Tuesday February 7th, 2006, johntaiyu (22) writes:
I've seen you! AT the end of the bar....boiling my blood


On Thursday February 9th, 2006, doll on the rag (222) writes:
sorry about that, dear. =/ you should come introduce yourself next time.


On Wednesday February 1st, 2006, LostInDespair (197) writes:
*sigh* .... get out of my head or stay there forever. ~Lost~


On Wednesday February 1st, 2006, LostInDespair (197) writes:
" I couldn't help but worry we'd be the last dissapointment in his life" ... "Two young regular something buring out their throats in an attempt to scorch their heart and feel anything"


On Tuesday January 31st, 2006, johntaiyu (22) writes:
i just love your poetry


On Tuesday January 31st, 2006, evolve (2261) writes:
I fucking love how you write scenario and it spells out as so personal.. every detail reflected with careful insight .. it's so lovely to wash in your memories. ♥.


On Tuesday January 31st, 2006, James_the_Saint (131) writes:
This is so charming to me. Very powerful.


On Monday January 30th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1122) writes:
dolly..you never stop amazing me, do you? i love reading your poems..it's like a snippet of you, placed so beautifully. everything about this..the words, the end..was wonderful. i love you. :)


On Monday January 30th, 2006, doll on the rag (222) writes:
hee... i changed it since you read it, i think.


On Monday January 30th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1122) writes:
hmm, you did. but i still love it. *mwah*



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