DarkPoetry -|- doll on the rag -|- [your permanence]

let's rejoice
let's shake it up
turn the volume up loud

let's be you and me
all happiness
and pure dumb
amazement
at how fucking alive we are
today

i wanna CELEBRATE
your permanence

take your ink from my pages
and weave my skin with it

we'll call it "the living chapter"

and you'll be

flesh of my flesh
blood of my blood

let's be magic
let's not waste
any more time
let's let go of those former stupidities
(well really that one's just for me but you knew that)

hey

let's be lovers

and since we've already got that

hey

let's just be friends
let's just be anything except unimportant
to one another

i wanna CELEBRATE
your permanence

take your ink from my pages
and weave my skin with it

we'll call it "the living chapter"

and you'll be

flesh of my flesh
blood of my blood

cause i really think
i'm finally coming into my own these days

yeah

and ain't that a trip
?

let's be sincere
let's be fiercefully forgiving

let's reminisce
about the [billion] tomorrows
coming our way

let's not breathe for a moment

cause in that silence hangs
all our better understanding

and

i wanna CELEBRATE
your permanence

take your ink from my pages
and weave my skin with it

we'll call it "the living chapter"

and you'll be

flesh of my flesh
blood of my blood

yeah

flesh of my flesh

and

blood of my blood

let's be lovely
let's be lovely
let's be lovely
(you're lovely)

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On Thursday January 12th, 2006, not an addict (55) writes:

now you just gotta let me know when you aren't afraid to sing it, mhmm.

On Friday January 13th, 2006, doll on the rag (223) writes:

you'll be the first to know, dear... (well, second after me.) i just have to get the alanis-voice in my head to stop singing it.

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, capt_funguy (999) writes:

kinda scary version of " happy together" by the turtles .. certainly more intense .. got a charge out of this ... heavy vibe damn convincing ... funguy

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, doll on the rag (223) writes:

i happen to love that song, so that's quite a compliment. =) thanks, love.

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

Wow. Crippling but yet sweet, in a weird way. This is sheer genius. Awesome, I can't say more. Julia~

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, doll on the rag (223) writes:

they say the crippling thing subsides after a few minutes. it's really just that your foot's fallen asleep. you can walk it off, no worries. =)

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:

"i wanna CELEBRATE your permanence take your ink from my pages and weave my skin with it" god, i think i'm in love with you too.

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, doll on the rag (223) writes:

you ladies will just have to duke it out, i'm afraid. =/

On Monday January 9th, 2006, James_the_Saint (131) writes:

I'm in love with you. (?)

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, doll on the rag (223) writes:

cool!

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, James_the_Saint (131) writes:

That's the reaction I was hoping for.

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, evolve (2229) writes:

This was a complete trip.. not so much the colorization, but the words themselves.. they were like a really strong euphoric stimulation with an amazing letdown.. spinning and gorgeous.

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, LostInDespair (199) writes:

!!! These words are stumbling from my fingertips like ackward silences.. I love this and you..all I can say. You are the personification of exquisite. ~Me(at your feet)~

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, indefined (713) writes:

heh, knight just told me to read this. most awesome work indeed.

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, doll on the rag (223) writes:

ooh, i've got promotion. neat! ^^ thanks for listening to him.

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, knightmirror (425) writes:

*standing ovation*.....very nice....very nice indeed....i really enjoyed this.....beautiful write and display of emotions.....if i could add this to my faves i would....but since i can't i hope you accept this *standing ovation*....knight

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, doll on the rag (223) writes:

thanks, sweet. =) standing ovations are warmly recieved. hee.

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