what's all the drama over the font size? lol this wasn't hard to read. "he apples in my cheeks once merely bruised, now rotted away "...i also loved the mirrored stanza. i can tell you put effort into this.

this piece appeals to all senses in an incredibly intense way. it's beautiful poetry, grasping art. you are definitely a favorite of mine darling.

it was worth the resizing of it. wayyy worth it. this is art.

i like you too. =) ooh, p.s.-- i faved you.

heh, i faved you too. cause you rock. and we dolls gotta stick together ;)

What I've noticed about your work is that you focus on words that give sensations.. particularly, touch-wise.. this is sensory and rather amazing, in my opinion.. a poetically and emotionally sound write .. stylish, too. ;)

It's rather evident to me that you spill your heart upon your page.. rather than your brain.. I've always thought poetry is the word of the heart. ..so, after all that, well done.

i love you like madcrazyfierce. you win at life and other, more important things. *mwah*

Definitely worth squinting for, again & again! Awesomely beautiful... Julia~

*fastens monocle*.......'....hypodermic kisses...'.....gotta love those toxic lips;)

I'm really sorry, but I can't read the font that small. Do I really have to copy and paste and resize all your work, to read it? It's a bit dangerous, to presume your work is worth all that time on my part.

do you really have to copy and paste all my work? no. you could just change the font size on your browser temporarily.

-temporarily change the font size on my browser-..........eee gats....that's just crazy enough to work.....too funny.......i was gonna give the same advice but......

it's your second comment that confuses me, though. i'm not assuming anything. i just happened to want a small font for this poem. wasn't exactly of the mindset "hey, my poems are the shit and if i wanna make people to work to read them, i'll damn well d

do it." it's arrogant and stupid of you to presume, dear, that i'd do something like that. and if your time is so valuable, why are you bothering to try and 'enlighten' me to the dangerous errors of my presuming ways?

Maybe I have superhuman eyeballs, but I read this (in fact, this is about the fourth time I've read this) and really liked it.. gosh damn.

Her art is worth it.

amyamy is my hero. *mwah*

And you called me a painful self-disintegration... You pull it off much better. Yes, my sweet, you always do have me.

There are lines here that I will never forget. ^V^

The effect this has on me, the story told, the talent with which it is writen, are all amazing to me. ^V^

Good god, how I felt this.. so raw and severe.. "someone's been crawling up my insides again and i woke up with this dirt lining my mouth"..

so precise is this feeling, but also so intangable.. but you've managed to put it into graceful words. I respect that a lot.

thank you, sweet... respect from you is quite a gift, i think.

b-e-a-utiful. Deep, dark... With a twist of lemmon ;)

i prefer nectarines, but that's okay. =)

you.. you just.. oh dear god! is right! you most certainly have the gift. This is truth. Again, thank you for your amazing words. ~b

*mwah*

Sharp images. Biting wit. "can't force up what wasn't swallowed" = :) The "Disgusting Reflection" part is also a killer. Just fabulous.

This is very impressing. So beautiful and amazing.. just wow.. I don't even know what to say I'm in awe. Lovely work.

... dam it, child. I'll come back.

you'd better.