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"i'm giving up
an important part of myself to-day,"

she says
matter-of-factly,
as indicated by
the hyphen
between 'to' and 'day'


i don't bite
at first

but her persistant silence
grows wearisome rather hastily


"and which part is it
this time?"

i ask,
still morning-tired
and preoccupied
by my hair
that never obeys


she tactfully ignores my inference
that "to-day" is just another
in a series of attempts
at self-dismantling:

a handful of 'important parts'
flung away
with the tender attentions
of a spoiled child




"singing,"

she replies,
gauging my face
for a reaction
before drawing another breath
and continuing

"there's a clarity
in everyone else's voice
i just don't hear in mine,"

she says flatly,

"some people
simply aren't meant to sing;


i'm one of them."



(this is the part
where i grab my toothbrush
and stomp out of the bathroom
to brush my teeth
at the kitchen sink)




sometimes
i can't forgive my reflection
for the things she says














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On Wednesday November 21st, 2007, xserratedsoulx (279) writes:
ps--the title really makes this peice. it really captivated my attention and when i got to the end and re-evaluated everything with the new meaning, it still worked in a great way!


On Wednesday November 21st, 2007, xserratedsoulx (279) writes:
LOVE it. love it love it love it love it.


On Thursday October 13th, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
and reading this was literally like reading a conversation with myself, word for word..


On Thursday October 13th, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
oh my.. you know whats funny? On my profile page.. my link to my (now abandoned) live journal is titled 'the stupidest girl in the world' when I read the title it made me think of myself..


On Wednesday October 12th, 2005, vaultgrl (236) writes:
...I love this....and can't beleive I haven't commented on it yet.....great write....I wish I could walk away from my reflection while in a room full of mirors....


On Tuesday October 11th, 2005, James_the_Saint (131) writes:
Oh this is so good, more props to you, and kisses. I give them all to you.


On Sunday October 9th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (319) writes:
:(


On Sunday October 9th, 2005, blue (1751) writes:
ahh.. to be among ourselves and those insipid little voices tearing at our sails. to be free of ourselves.. that is the trick. great write lovely lady ~b


On Sunday October 9th, 2005, not an addict (55) writes:
i'm hoping this one is not about you... i think i would miss you singing sarah way too much...


On Sunday October 9th, 2005, doll on the rag (223) writes:
oh, it is... was? is. (hence the title!) but not because i'm actually doing it. more of a poking-fun-at-self sort of thing. and generally wishing i could actually walk away from my reflection/embodiment of self-lothing. no worries. all is good!


On Sunday October 9th, 2005, doll on the rag (223) writes:
and in this instance, 'lothing' actually means 'loathing'. right.


On Saturday October 8th, 2005, evolve (2231) writes:
..if only I didn't know this..astounding, how you take this concept, and run with it into creative oblivion..yet it stays on the ground and becomes yet another deep-faceted revelation..I find myself looking forward to your two-sided wisdoms.


On Saturday October 8th, 2005, evolve (2231) writes:
Thank you, again, doll. ~ June


On Friday October 7th, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1073) writes:
"sometimes I can't forgive my reflection for the things she says" *takes her mirror from the wall and smashes it to the floor* I don't care if that gets me seven years of bad luck...your words have killed me anyway. *Evangel*


On Friday October 7th, 2005, wandering druid (101) writes:
The last line hit me hard in the face. Excellent work, and an awesome ending.


On Friday October 7th, 2005, xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx (44) writes:
You are an awesome writer!!! I love all of the brilliant things you come up with....."sometimes..i can't forgive my reflection...for the things she says"....It makes me think..


On Friday October 7th, 2005, squench (7) writes:
it was drawing me in in and had me...great work!!!!!!


On Friday October 7th, 2005, Cutting_for_Freedom (47) writes:
I liked this alot. It was very good. Nice job.


On Friday October 7th, 2005, mysticventures (546) writes:
hehehe - oh that was good :)



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