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it's a clear day out

things are blue
and relatively warm

you walk
the six-and-a-half blocks
to your destination:

a squat, nondescript building
without a sign
and a fading address

an old woman smiles at you
as you pass on the sidewalk


you're a pretty girl, after all


you take the steps
two at a time
even though there's only four

the doorknob is cool to the touch


inside, the receptionist
is nonchalant about taking your name

you squirm on a vinyl-covered sofa
beside two other women who look
as relaxed as your breathing is not

they disappear
one after the other
through a pastel-blue door

led by their unfamiliar names
and a dishwater blonde,
a clipboard in her left hand
and white teeth
in a mouth that does not smile


your name is called
and it, too, is unfamiliar


beyond the door
lies a sea of curtains
and swishing lab coats

you're ushered away
disrobed and redressed
with the practised efficiency
of the blonde clipboard woman

she doesn't smile
until

"the Doctor will be in shortly."

here, she smiles
and it's smeared with sadness


you're a pretty girl, after all


everything is septic-white
and stinks of disinfectant

a stack of pamphlets on the table
offers up comforting words
and cheerfully approves your decision

you stare at a slogan
"It's Your Choice!"
until the room fades to black
and your eyes sting

and soon, the Doctor comes
two mother/matron nurses as reinforcements
in case you've changed your mind

they poke you,
prodding you into place
and trying to create the illusion
you're perfectly okay

if you were braver
the boy would be here

the fact he's no longer your boy
is irrelevant

but you're not brave
you're a child
and the nurse-mothers fuss over you

they hold your hands
smooth your hair
and tell you

you're doing fine
everything will be better tomorrow


you're a pretty girl, after all


the Doctor is more discerning
with dispersing sympathies
and instead makes inane smalltalk

you don't hear a word--
your eyes are closed too tight

for the briefest eternity
there is a coldness that seeps
into the pit of your belly

you suck in air
and forget to breathe



you wait



when you open your eyes again
you're already dressed
and nodding mechanically
as the Doctor rattles off directions

you don't know what time it is
but you find the receptionist all the same

she gives you a plastic bag
full of papers and important-looking
pieces of nothing

you smile in thanks
and it hurts

by the door sits a tiny thing
barely woman enough to have breasts

she catches your eye and recoils
a distance noticeable only to you
before dropping her head in her hands
and weeping


you open the door
and escape from her moment of realization

as you step off the bottom stair
a hundred eyes are upon you
smouldering with

disgust
revulsion
hatred

they follow you the whole walk home,
an acrid, burning trail hanging in the air

outside the sky is dark
as if mother nature knows
and is plotting revenge

the wind slices across your cheek
like a clean, cold blade

but you press on and on
biting your lip
and clutching your little bag
of plastic sincerities

the sidewalk public parts for you
and your confident strides

a boy calls out something as you pass


you're a pretty girl, after all


the key to your apartment
clicks sharply in your ears

you slip unnoticed
among the inanimate trappings
of your life:

empty chairs
at an empty table

you crawl into your empty bed
and stare up at the ceiling
for thirteen hours

sleep, too,
resents you now
and will not pay a visit

in the bathroom
you clutch the toilet
and heave

nauseated by the knowledge
that morning sickness will never come

you drift aimlessly
down your hollow hallway
turning from the mirrors as you pass

but the mirrors advance
and confront you with sharp corners

their refusal to lie claws at you

so you tear them from the walls
and shatter them,
seven total

sitting amongst the fragments
you finger one of those
god-damned pamphlets

you try to believe
the reassuring paragraphs
the guiltless font
the smiling face inside


you don't cry




you're a pretty girl, after all












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On Sunday June 1st, 2008, ritzallu (9) writes:
whoa.


On Thursday May 15th, 2008, Chaos God (59) writes:
Nice.


On Wednesday May 14th, 2008, Savannah (290) writes:
F'n WOW I wanna cry. You gave me chills


On Monday May 12th, 2008, colorapathy (63) writes:
i know i've commented on this before... but everytime i read it.. it just hits me like a wall.


On Wednesday May 7th, 2008, me_the_messenger (173) writes:
wow. this, it made me feel as if it was being told about me. what great words you choose. the feeling you created inside of me... was... unexplainable.


On Thursday May 1st, 2008, Saschwann (17) writes:
At first I couldn't even find words but I wanted to comment so badly. I am astonished at the talent that this work imbodies. The emotion that it brought me too is outstanding. Wow.


On Thursday May 1st, 2008, Saschwann (17) writes:
wow...


On Sunday April 27th, 2008, Mab (1095) writes:
thank you for writing this..because I never could.


On Sunday April 27th, 2008, Army Barbie (501) writes:
It's like falling into the face of someone's memories...and they don't even realize you're standing beside them watching replay. Chilling, nausiating. Some of the most painful subjects can produce the most vivid works.


On Monday April 7th, 2008, colorapathy (63) writes:
I can't really say exactly how I feel about this, only that it is masterfully written... thank you for posting.


On Friday April 4th, 2008, Miss Mars (387) writes:
this touched. i cried. -mars


On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, Nixx (146) writes:
this touched..


On Friday March 28th, 2008, Geisha (801) writes:
This made me feel like mercury collected in the pit of my stomach, and brought me to tears. As guilt is once again eating away my conscience, I have to say, I really felt this.


On Monday March 17th, 2008, serotonin lost (222) writes:
i wonder how many people read this and cried but are to terrified to post a comment in fear of people knowing there choice? well written well felt. i'm a boy so have little basis to compare but this still touched me.


On Thursday June 22nd, 2006, Remember_The_Fallen (1) writes:
This didn't just touch my heart... I touched my soul. You are very talented. I've never been able to sort my emotions from my experience. But after reading this-- I have a place to start.


On Friday December 30th, 2005, Loserland (134) writes:
fuck......fuck!.......fuck......them there's summ powerful words when arranged like so...mickey likes it!


On Monday December 19th, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:
this is stand-back admire, love the intricate details and the bigger picture kind of poetry. the kind that makes legends. lovely and emotive piece.


On Sunday October 2nd, 2005, Lynaes (1139) writes:
Sometimes you read a piece of literature, and you just know it's a huge achievement created by someone greatly talented.. this is one them. I commend you for the vividness, for the realism, the uncensored raw emotion.. This is truly brilliant. Perfection.


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, The_Lady_in_the_Fire (26) writes:
I have to agree with Ani ( V ), this was a couragous write. I dont know what else to say. *Torah*


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, SamoneDrone (410) writes:
i logged in just so i could comment on this. you had a firm grip on my attention all the way untill the very end. this was amazing and heart-wrenching. i can't say enough about how this touched me. great, great job. ....-samone


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, AniDayz (1294) writes:
chillingly courageous piece...most emotive,most sincere...hearthrobbingly portrayed. this embraces all...im completely thrown aback in respect.awed to the pit of my stomach..hit in the heart. i commend this.you. --


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, An Expired Member (8) writes:
this was so well written, it had my undevided attention. really sad, made me teary eyed


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, An Expired Member (58) writes:
that was amazing... thats all i have to say about that. there are no other words.


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, the dried flower (83) writes:
wow, there really isn't much for me to say but i'm sry that you once felt this way(or still do taday) your a good poem writer because your writings seem to come from exsperiences you have had.


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, wonderlandhysteria (2184) writes:
..this made me feel ugly, very ugly. ..and that's putting it simply. This needed to be written. I'll thank you for those who couldn't write it themselves.


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, Err0r (586) writes:
That just gave me chills. Great write.


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, Six-Out (1819) writes:
I have goosebumps. I know a girl who had one...and went through this exact thing. You write with conviction, dear. And it's ever so marvelously horrid.


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, Jerrica (126) writes:
i agree SilentStalker. I wish this situation was as easy and short as this poem. it is a beautiful write.


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx (44) writes:
This was absolutely brilliant. I love your writing style and how it flows. The descriptions is what got me to get into it; to see what you was happening. My emotions were totally into this one. And no you probably don't deserve any shit from anyone...


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx (44) writes:
It's your decision, not anyone elses. Tell them to fuck off. ~Hannah


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, SilentStalker (1318) writes:
...actually, I just sense realism from this, and I'm sure that even when a woman has no other choice but to go through with one of these, that tinge of guilt and/or sadness is still present...


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, elisa (1980) writes:
'tinge'....i have never read such an understatement...a very sterile word for such a subject...hmm


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, SilentStalker (1318) writes:
...what would be truly sad would be if thoughts like this never occurred to someone--if they never weighed the different possibilities, or cared that there was ever more than one choice...


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, doll on the rag (223) writes:
i have the feeling i am going to catch a lot of shit for this one, because i've written about something very personal for a lot of people. so please, feel free to rip on me. i probably deserve it.



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