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"if i were the world,
would there be a you?"




"someone to watch over me,
take care of me."

(if i were the world)




god is nothing more
than a boy with pills
watching a girl rolling
for the first time







god is nothing more
than lovers on ecstasy.






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On Monday July 25th, 2005, not an addict (55) writes:
an evening that will forever be my religion (were the blue lights, perhaps, our dogma?) *love*


On Monday July 25th, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
perhaps, though to me they were more an altar at which i found myself persistantly kneeling. i don't believe, however, any other (a)theistic practice has such perfect choir music.


On Saturday July 23rd, 2005, braindead_poet (578) writes:
i find the last stanza to be an outstanding analogy. The words of wisdom are not lengthy and drawn, but short and brief.


On Saturday July 23rd, 2005, blue (1757) writes:
damn. "if i were the world" damn. ~b


On Saturday July 23rd, 2005, Anth (1609) writes:
my fave of yours


On Saturday July 23rd, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
thank you, sweet. =)


On Saturday July 23rd, 2005, redtearswhitesnow (93) writes:
Wow.Beautiful.


On Saturday July 23rd, 2005, Elegant Kiss (315) writes:
Dollface.:)


On Saturday July 23rd, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
amyamy. =)


On Friday July 22nd, 2005, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:
your beautiful:)


On Saturday July 23rd, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
hardly. just a gilder of memories, a glamourizer of past happenings.


On Saturday July 23rd, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
though the experience in itself is no falsification or exaggeration... it's just inembraceable with mere words. i've tried.


On Friday July 22nd, 2005, Twilight (2097) writes:
this is actually pretty fucking cool...awesome thought.


On Friday July 22nd, 2005, Six-Out (1820) writes:
I want to kiss your brain.


On Friday July 22nd, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
it would be kind of sticky.


On Friday July 22nd, 2005, Six-Out (1820) writes:
That's quite alright.


On Friday July 22nd, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
you're scaring people away from my poems. stop that.


On Friday July 22nd, 2005, Six-Out (1820) writes:
I will not.



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