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to all you self-serving, comment-whoring fuckers.



stop it.



stop putting yourself
in my place
(we can't share it)

stop taking my memories
and labeling them yours
(your writing is illegible)

stop claiming you understand
these misarranged arrangements
(you have no empathy)

stop putting your name
on my reluctant lips
(i've never spoken to you)

stop saying you've been
everywhere my footsteps lie
(no one followed me here)



stop multiplying

stop making chains of one another
beating paths to each and every
fuck-you suicide note
and anti-social tendency
posted in rapid-fire succession

stop getting each other off
all over the place
with your bitter-torment screennames
and your blood-dripping poem titles

(oh, but it tastes so good
and everyone will notice your fangs)




go ahead
and wrap yourselves
in your precious black velvet
and crimson satin
and make small-talk with the
demons in the night,
telling your scar-noted stories
over and over again
to an audience who will fawn over you
like you want.

a really satisfying ego-fuck.



go ahead.
i don't give a shit.





but stop masturbating here
and stay away from my poems.











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On Saturday April 26th, 2008, colorapathy (65) writes:
well written.. biting and harsh. hurrah for enjoyable sarcasm and insults.


On Thursday June 29th, 2006, Thorn (434) writes:
I'm gonna leave this lame statement as a comment, just to spite you. Hahahaha... But seriously, I still get a kick out of this write.


On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, ONEANDLONELY (134) writes:
iF yOU wANT pEOPLE tO sTOP rEADING yOUR pOEMS, tHEN sTOP nAMING tHEM... "masturbation"


On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, doll on the rag (222) writes:
you're really dumb.


On Wednesday November 30th, 2005, Clementine (153) writes:
comment removed by DP admins


On Saturday October 29th, 2005, Mistress Shadow (382) writes:
You make a note worthy point and you portray it in a simple yet concise form. Fricken awesome piece! (to join the masses) ~T~


On Tuesday August 9th, 2005, Thorn (434) writes:
*smiles, but says nothing*


On Friday August 5th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (468) writes:
LOL fuckin' A that cracks me up. Of course... by commenting I'm becoming part of all you despise... my name on your unforgiving lips (does it taste bitter?)


On Tuesday July 26th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (317) writes:
This was fucking awesome. Great write. -kitty


On Thursday July 21st, 2005, Saint_Reaper (284) writes:
wow, this is a new side of the doll.... angry yet i like it...


On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (548) writes:
(I can not believe no one has done this yet) WOW! I could totaly feel this! its like you took the words right out of my head! I can relate to this totaly and completly!( sorry but if I hadn't done it some body else would have)


On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, Jonas (878) writes:
what do you mean no one has done this yet? poems like this come up all the time. i think it's funny (and i am and have been guilty too, mind)


On Thursday July 21st, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
i think he means no one left a comment of the very nature i was ranting about. i'm well aware this is not an original topic, but thanks for your input.


On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, Jonas (878) writes:
that we all come to a place called 'darkpoetry' and wonder that there are needy 'gothy' teen-angst types around looking for validation...


On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, Jonas (878) writes:
it's like a sore in the mouth. yea, i'm usually dissapointed with the comments i get as they are just trying to get my attention... but i still get good feedback from my favorites here... and that's good enough for me.


On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, Jonas (878) writes:
and that's my two cents.


On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
someone was bound to do it... at least you weren't being sincere.


On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, Six-Out (1820) writes:
Hah. I love you.


On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
you bet you do.


On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, stormtalk (884) writes:
She's mine.


On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, Six-Out (1820) writes:
I don't think so little man.


On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
aww... how sweet. nothing gives me the warm fuzzies like poets bickering over my affections.


On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, PoeticHellion (244) writes:
Wow. You have a lot of guts. *lifts glass* Cheers.


On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, An Expired Member (21) writes:
hmm caught me by surprise


On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
you're probably one of the people who clicked on it because of the title, and thinking maybe you'd get to read a dirty lust-poem


On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, elisa (1989) writes:
boo-yaa!! mock emotions are pathetic


On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, Deliverence (797) writes:
I enjoy my blood dripping poem titles, as they deserve such names, otherwise what's the point right? A bold poem none the less.-Kefkism


On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, Evil (547) writes:
wow.. that was rough. i feel like you just desicrated me. for some reason. this was fucking harsh. nicely done.


On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
i'm the nicest bitch you'll ever meet. service with a smile, and all that jazz. thanks for reading. *mwah*


On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:
I don't believe anyone has said it better.


On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
oh, they have. this is just my little venting piece.


On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (315) writes:
*breathesmiles*


On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
you spoil me, amyamy.


On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (315) writes:
As do you, me, love.



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