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sometimes

i wish
you'd keep your poems away,
locked in a drawer
or your memory--
keyless
and
impenetrable,
beyond the taint
of my wandering eyes

because

i have a
self-serving tendency
to put myself
in each line i read,
making a place
for me
in a time
i never was

and

it makes me feel
so selfish,
this egostroke of mine--
corrupting and corroding
sentiments
elsewhere inspired
and carved out
below
another's name

though

i would gladly
bind this mind
to pre(sent)-set confines
of time
and space
and remembrance
my heart insists
otherwise
other ways
of placing me
between you and
everyone else

so

i pour over
textfont photos
scanning your free verse
for my face
a thumbprint impression
in impressionistic
language
hidden by some
sleepy sunday
i forgot to decipher

but

i am pinned beneath
a dualconflict
so melodramatically
juxtaposed
in thunderous reason
clashing:
though i search
for familiar eyes
dotted in your own
i fail
to convince myself
i'm worthy
of the words





"foolish" is the name
i most often give myself.










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On Friday August 5th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (475) writes:
and likewise, the feeling of disenchantment when we realise we can never truly access the mindspace the writer was feeding from... we only see a pale reflection of the brilliance they perceived...


On Friday August 5th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (475) writes:
yes... as soon as we release our poems they belong to the reader... scary coz no control over their perception of it...


On Thursday July 21st, 2005, Jay Jii (337) writes:
Utterly fascinating. A spell-binding piece of writing.


On Thursday July 14th, 2005, capt_funguy (1006) writes:
wow , you absolutely nailed a beautifully specific fragility .. multi tiered and unrecoverable sadsweet insecurity ( unintentional rhyme ) ... excellent work ... funguy


On Thursday July 14th, 2005, blue (1780) writes:
magnificent, absolutely magnificent! ~b


On Thursday July 14th, 2005, Guttercat (36) writes:
This is... after a coupla cans o' lager, da bomb.


On Thursday July 14th, 2005, doll on the rag (223) writes:
i don't know if that's meant to be a compliment or an insult.


On Thursday July 14th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (302) writes:
You hold the balance, doll. I'm constantly in awe at everything you do. You're this little heart I hold inside my own heart and when I need a little hope.. a little beauty - I just open you up and it floods me.


On Thursday July 14th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (302) writes:
I hope you know how magnificent you are.. I hope you know that I always sit here after I read you.. beyond amazed.. respectfully. I'm babbling because it's 6:30 in the morning. But pray you, just know.


On Thursday July 14th, 2005, elisa (1987) writes:
you could hit an ink dot mark on top of a pin head with a 22 on the back side of mars.............................*s t r o k e*:)


On Thursday July 14th, 2005, serotonin lost (225) writes:
for some strange reason i think i know how you feel.



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