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you
flee
to
elsewhere
silently
without
warning
and
i teLL
MYSELF
I
DON'T
CARE
BECAuse
it
isn't
here.







Copyright 2005 doll on the rag

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On Monday June 11th, 2007, An Expired Member (7) writes:
I like this.


On Tuesday September 27th, 2005, Err0r (564) writes:
dark, gloomy, almost moody. ...A very sexy write. :D Yes indeed, Sexy is the word for it.


On Thursday June 23rd, 2005, Valentine (508) writes:
how is it that you express so much in so few words? This is tear-jerking in the strangest of ways.. Magnificent, dear.


On Thursday June 23rd, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
i don't know what it is i do that gets at people so... i am simply putting down the things that cut my heart. if it pains you, i am not sorry.


On Thursday June 9th, 2005, Lynaes (1121) writes:
Oh. dear. god. How can words be so perfect? Astoundingly put. This jolted my heart.. very nice work.


On Thursday June 9th, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
thank you, dear... i doubt muchly this supposed perfection, but if it's touched you, i've done my job mostly right.


On Thursday June 9th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (315) writes:
.. the most perfect thing not to read today. Something I feel today but didn't want to hear. So simple, yet forced the pain to in front of my face..


On Thursday June 9th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (315) writes:
instead of in the background...


On Thursday June 9th, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
sorry to hear you're hurting, dearheart... but glad to know you can face it. don't let it fester.



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