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trees versus people
rings of xylem, phloem
like wrinkles under heavy eyes
together they grow
branches outreaching
arms open.
embracing
sky and selves
secret fruit and talents
shaded underneath
hung on lower limbs
stretching to find
that sweet piece
that hidden moment
thrashing violently
storms weathered out
sometimes not.
weighted with age
pieces fall
seeds forgotten
bloom
elsewhere inspired.
whispers among
their inner hallows
some rotting
away
on the inside
self-consuming sickness
'til they fall.
if you listen
you can hear the very fibers
screaming as they
are wrenched
from their foundation
twisting, fighting
torn apart
felled by life
with only half
of what once was
remaining
 
a contorted soul
 
a misshapen trunk
 
jagged remnants like
fingers pointing
in accusation
at
the
sky.





 




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On Wednesday March 8th, 2006, xserratedsoulx (279) writes:
your best work yet! ~lauren~


On Thursday July 21st, 2005, Jay Jii (336) writes:
Intense images. This is truly great poetry. *Inserts "doll on the rag" into faves.


On Friday July 15th, 2005, Saint_Reaper (288) writes:
wow, you are honestly my favorite poet in this place, just keep bringing these delightful writes...


On Saturday June 4th, 2005, purr_verse (1437) writes:
bang. what a conclusion - now that's subtle power done marvellously. *applause* The duality is wonderful.


On Saturday June 4th, 2005, doll on the rag (223) writes:
hee... this one i like muchly. it's one of the few in which i take pride. the last bit is my favorite part, for sure.


On Saturday June 4th, 2005, jaunty pill (74) writes:
Almost a violent and jutting use of words. The way they cut through the soul , The mind , It is an embodiment all its own. As ElegantKiss said: " Brilliant "...But I have to say , Yet again.


On Saturday June 4th, 2005, doll on the rag (223) writes:
and yet again, i thank you. it's almost surreal to see how people react... i guess because i've read these over and over, sometimes i have to struggle to find what people see in them.


On Saturday June 4th, 2005, Northstar (455) writes:
this is beautiful--very well crafted


On Saturday June 4th, 2005, doll on the rag (223) writes:
thank you for taking the time to read. =)


On Saturday June 4th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (319) writes:
I feel like I'm choking back. The whole fucking time I read this I felt like I was choking back. Gah. Instant fave. Have I told you that you're brilliant?


On Saturday June 4th, 2005, doll on the rag (223) writes:
aww, thanks. =) you make me blush. it is good to know this stuff touches people.



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