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Quicksand

Patiently im waiting
Though it's killing me inside
I can hear your words and taste your kiss
Yet I still can't call you mine

Fighting the temptation
To keep these thoughts from coming alive
Trying so hard to hide from you
That I need you to survive

It doesnt matter how close I am to you
Or even that we know our love is true
Unless we are together it isn't real
It's time to show me how you truly feel

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On Monday September 18th, 2006, PoeticHellion (244) writes:

I feel you there sweetie. I love you.

On Tuesday September 12th, 2006, elisa (1990) writes:

this made me....ache.

On Tuesday September 12th, 2006, mysterylove (92) writes:

its exactly what i went through, its painful, i know.

On Tuesday September 12th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1048) writes:

"Unless we are together it isn't real"...*sighs* You've portrayed a feeling I've only dreamed of feeling up til now, and now that I'm feeling it, I'm not too sure I want to be. You're beautiful. ~*Beth*~

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