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Will someone please stop me
They're all calling out to me
Yet i see no one
I keep turning in confusion
I dont know who or where to run to
I choke on my tears and fall
But my mind is still spinning
I reach out for something
Anything to slow me down
To help me up
But theres nothing there
Someone has taken it all away
Theres just this spinning
How am I to continue living
When I can't breathe
When I can't stand
When i'm so torn into pieces
Where am I going
How do I stop
Im so sick and i've had enough
Am I awake or is this a Nightmare
If it is, please:
someone wake me






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On Saturday March 3rd, 2007, Rebel_not_Radical (158) writes:
~there's a rushing feeling that comes with reading this poem, really great that it accompanies the message of helplessness and despair...cool write


On Saturday March 3rd, 2007, the dried flower (81) writes:
i like...


On Wednesday June 22nd, 2005, Thorn (434) writes:
This is a good one. I like the style; very authentic.


On Sunday June 12th, 2005, lollipoplips (109) writes:
"where am i going......im so sick ive had enough.....is this a nightmare....someone wake me." awesome, i can feel the confusion in your poem. -lo lo



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