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I met a man today.
in the convenience store. business suit
and gourmet coffee for fifty cents.
he almost smiled at me
when he spoke.

his words- half trite, half nothing at all
when he said
'son. you'll never get anywhere in life
looking like that'


and I almost smiled at him. when I spoke back.
words meek and full of sarcastic tremors.
this moment monger. treading on my tattooed skin.
like he knew the story of my life.
that smug grin. and I merely said.

'but sir.
you'll never be able to live the life
you achieve. being
like that'

and his face turned into a sneer, as he marched away
to his lexus. I'm sure it comforted him
to know I was still dirty from labor
while he was leaving his mundane life- to go home
to his trite existence.
and I'm sure he took pleasure.
when I nodded as I walked past his car.

to the friends in mine. smiles and memories.
yes. I'm sure his leather seats had more to offer.
mister business suit. to you.
I hope tomorrow.


you live.



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On Sunday July 29th, 2007, Adaml (243) writes:
Did this really happen to you? People do this every day just like you said it. I work in hotels and we get people that are like that all the time. Always think they are better then us because we are working here well they are going to their “important” c


On Sunday July 29th, 2007, Adaml (243) writes:
Always think they are better then us because we are working here well they are going to their “important” conference/bonus-party(s) -- Adaml PS: Nice job writing it how it is.


On Friday July 20th, 2007, Rain In The Willows (853) writes:
I missed this most of all...


On Friday June 22nd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:
hit home with the force of a shotgun telegram.... truly one of my favorites from you.


On Thursday June 14th, 2007, Revolting Theatre (37) writes:
Ah, the subtle preaching of a wiseman...I think we'd all do well to learn from this poem...good write Jon. Next time just hit him in the balls.


On Wednesday June 13th, 2007, Kinkypoptart (765) writes:
I've met so many people like this and, admittedly, on more than one occasion have dreamed of driving a lexus and wearing a business suit... Great job... -Kinks


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, jack paper (207) writes:
convenience store morality... banality... you certainly know how to work the angles... make something simple seem like some kind of life lesson...


On Monday June 11th, 2007, Alanarchy (1694) writes:
Nice car. Nice suit. How many skeletons? How addicted? to what?


On Monday June 11th, 2007, PoeticHellion (250) writes:
it's true, yo.


On Sunday June 10th, 2007, Michelle Xiao (499) writes:
He had no self-respect.


On Sunday June 10th, 2007, evolve (2245) writes:
...that last stanza was moving, in its own right. Concise enough to get the point across, but provocative enough to equally do so. Well spat.


On Sunday June 10th, 2007, Tania (304) writes:
I hate being judged too.. wonderful :)


On Sunday June 10th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (456) writes:
oooh very nice... :)


On Saturday June 9th, 2007, Army Barbie (491) writes:
I didn't even look at the author of this wonderful piece until I went to comment and it told me who wrote it...And now I realize why this is so amazing.


On Saturday June 9th, 2007, Sharon Rose (658) writes:
maybe he is living and you just don't get it for the same reason you think he doesn't...his version of what it is to live is different from yours...it doesn't make his soul empty, it doesn't make him unhappy..but it makes you petty when you think so...


On Saturday June 9th, 2007, Six-Out (1823) writes:
Or maybe I was just annoyed that he judged me by my looks, so I did the same to him? get your panties out of a bunch. And stop thinking I think I'm better than you. or anyone.


On Sunday July 29th, 2007, DarkPoet (225) writes:
But I'm better than you! I wear no pants at all!


On Monday July 30th, 2007, Six-Out (1823) writes:
Bull without pics.



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