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you live in my hands
and when I speak your name.
I can taste the bitter.
ink.

they say- that there is beauty in simplicity.
and that when the world is breaking down.
the only falling apart you do.
is internal. flames like desire.
and it's never enough to just walk on hot coals.
when the sky is cracked.

with crooked picture frames. dusty sepia.slurish
mementos. is all i have left-
from the time you held my hand while they watched.
I wished I was a superhero that could freeze time.
but your fingers were cold enough.

so now. I re-collect the worlds you whispered.
when you spoke so clearly of life through intoxicated eyes.
and told me that letters would make me famous.

well. here I am. with my hair in my eyes.
sometimes- I want to be simple. instead of weaving
the complexities that I speak with pen and pad.
like this.

this isn't beautiful. so I'll rip myself open
in ways that infant eyes can comprehend. yes.
simply speaking.

[I miss you]


and they tell me that my words are like bullets.
while I'm still carrying you on my back.
willingly- I burn this burden.
and whisper myself to sleep with
a spoken lullaby.












'por lo menos puse seis hacia fuera'



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On Friday January 11th, 2008, RequiemExMortis (17) writes:
Well, other than your sole use of periods in your poem, which confused me a little, I liked it very much. Good wording and good sense of emotion... sort of like you expected nothing less from the future than the bleak outlook written of in this poem. I feel very much the same way. Nice job... I think you've out-rated anything I've ever written with this one work.


On Wednesday February 28th, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (205) writes:
You remind me of feeling's I have not felt for some time now. Beautiful is not the feeling of your write, but it is Beautifully written, as expected. -Heather-


On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, Nightingale (555) writes:
Veo las palabras que usted habla como cuadros en una pared. (did I say that right?)


On Tuesday February 20th, 2007, Astra Dei (644) writes:
You havent lost your touch,


On Tuesday February 20th, 2007, An Expired Member (30) writes:
wow


On Tuesday February 20th, 2007, Rachel (393) writes:
I know the feeling.


On Saturday February 17th, 2007, Ashlar (258) writes:
You are absolutely wonderful...


On Thursday February 15th, 2007, zanewill (111) writes:
holy mother of god>> this evoked an unexpected GUSH of breath leaving my body, yet attacking itself..>>> HOlymotherOFcHristoS>>> UR so wonderfuly eloquently intensely passionately>> profane & equisitely unique in the conjuring of wordplay...Excellent


On Tuesday February 13th, 2007, PoeticHellion (250) writes:
There isn't much to say that isn't already said.


On Tuesday February 13th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:
your words always leave me twisted inside, like a case of vertigo, but only in my stomach.... thank you


On Tuesday February 20th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:
had to come back and read this again, my stomach is still spinning, makes me miss someone special


On Saturday February 10th, 2007, Freebird (642) writes:
Speechless, once again.


On Saturday February 10th, 2007, carlosjackal (1716) writes:
"this isn't beautiful"..the situation you express isn't but the way you've used words to form this poem to express the situation IS beautiful. Oh, and stop driving that forklift like a fuckin' girl! :P


On Saturday February 10th, 2007, sIo (884) writes:
this is HORRIBLE. oh my gosh. why do you even TRY anymore. distasteful and gross and icky and stupid and BLAH and ewwwww. gawh. stoopid monkey.


On Monday February 26th, 2007, Sharon Rose (658) writes:
hah! best comment ever...


On Saturday February 10th, 2007, Arianna (192) writes:
*awed silence*


On Friday February 9th, 2007, AniDayz (1267) writes:
spoken...validated.heard...


On Friday February 9th, 2007, Mylissa (1075) writes:
Te adoro...this is beautiful.


On Friday February 9th, 2007, verablue (159) writes:
no criticism needed, because it is 'good'. infact, i would go beyond 'good' and tell you that its absolutely beautiful. "I re-collect the worlds you whispered" you always amaze me.


On Friday February 9th, 2007, Drea (929) writes:
This reminded me of my grandfather. It made me remember things I thought I forgot. Thank you for that. Wonderfully written, Jon


On Friday February 9th, 2007, Six-Out (1822) writes:
I didn't write this for it to be seen as 'good'. I wrote this because I felt I needed to. So, comments are welcome, but no criticism, please.



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