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spraypaint.serenade [we're strung and in love]

distort-.

drumstick-madness. they may
call us the crazy fucks.
midnight magic- and we're mindless.
tied down by cords and words.

mic in hand. metaphorical maniac
is what one said about me. and the boys
sing my words like we're already famous.
wake the neighbors. they need to hear
this wisdom- that spills from the amplifiers.
like soundwave-spraypaint.
and graffiti tag lines.

guitar strings strangling meanings from the screaming
erupting from my throat. I want to be
my words. as the bass beats twice as hard
as my heart. tripping streamlined whispers
and we sing.

yes we sing.

sweat dripping. the feedback roars.
and I mouth- fuck the misbelievers. this is heaven.
and we break silence like we're famous.
tonight.

we- scream.
that this. is. our.

[freedom]

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On Saturday October 6th, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl (341) writes:

Hell yes. Music is what it's all about.

On Sunday May 13th, 2007, Rain In The Willows (853) writes:

I love it. It's kinda how I feel when sing with a band...I miss it:(

On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, Nightingale (555) writes:

you'll always be a rockstar to me. ;)

On Thursday February 8th, 2007, zanewill (111) writes:

write-on six-out...that's the key: "do it like ur famous". hey man, how do u think all those people in LA got famous!?LOL>>>>>>>>>>>>peace-out

On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, Twilight (2101) writes:

those last three lines gave me the usual chills that only your work can give me

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1148) writes:

ah, this is perfect jon.."the boys sing my words like we're already famous." you've captured an intense feeling, as only you could do.

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (749) writes:

"soundwave-spraypaint" - Fantastic! : ) Ciao, T/S

On Wednesday January 31st, 2007, PoeticHellion (250) writes:

This was beautiful. There will always be power in music with friends.

On Tuesday January 30th, 2007, Astra Dei (644) writes:

Wonderful.

On Monday January 29th, 2007, Freebird (642) writes:

Hahaha. This was kick ass. Nicely done.

On Monday January 29th, 2007, Lynaes (1128) writes:

..and I can see you with your band, mic in hand, singing your heart out. I gotta hear that voice of yours soon. s usual, you've orchestrated a beauty symphony of words Jon, I love this.

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (208) writes:

agreed, it all comes into words beautifully, now we just need to hear what it is you gotta say. Missed reading your works, glad to be back and can't wait to keep reading, thanks a bunch. -Heather-

On Monday January 29th, 2007, Alanarchy (1681) writes:

Mooooooooooooooooooooooooore cowbell!!!!

On Monday January 29th, 2007, Alanarchy (1681) writes:

"Mic in hand. Metaphorical maniac is what one said about me." Loved that, man.

On Monday January 29th, 2007, Mylissa (1071) writes:

"and I mouth- fuck the misbelievers. this is heaven." Fav. line by far. I love this.

On Monday January 29th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:

well you found that perfect title for starters, and you some how captured my feelings when im at band practice, thank you for putting it into words

On Monday January 29th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:

had to read again, fav for sure

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