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she spoke obsidian



she spoke obsidian to me
like oblivion that leaked from her lips
cheek-like obsession. and an onyx backdrop.
screaming -it's worth breaking
if it's worth believing. in.side those eyes.
it's always reliving.

and I wore her sorrow like tear-stained romances
torn out of my notebook. she didn't allow metaphors
-shoving a page into my chest. the ink eats me.
and she's speaking in starless skies
like a magician that's lost their touch.

she asked me if I'd dance the heartache with her-
with the somber songs singing ebony eccentrics. I'm lost
and she'd break mirrors like some modern age picasso
telling me how it's abstract- to count the years
until she's free. dumbly speaking pitches
like the black that flows from the pen
she's shoving into my veins.

and she'd tell me she's livid.
melodrama and mixed drinks. she takes the time
to speak. -s.c.r.e.a.m

and it's midnight, she sings.
her lips touch mine. and she whispers. breathe.

just breathe.



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On Tuesday January 22nd, 2008, RequiemExMortis (17) writes:
Interesting. The images penned strike my mind in almost touching ways. Nicely done.


On Wednesday June 20th, 2007, An Expired Member (4) writes:
A very beautiful write in my opinion, I love the beginning. Thanks for sharing, really loved reading it.


On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, Disassembly Boy (97) writes:
Very nice write, I enjoyed it much. :) thanks for sharing.


On Saturday January 27th, 2007, Zen (623) writes:
who the fuck are these poems about? i sure as hell wanna meet this girl


On Saturday January 20th, 2007, slow.burn.star (99) writes:
~~your ink, eats me. xxx fantastic jewel of a poem. *star


On Tuesday January 16th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:
i somehow felt relieved when i read this, never really felt that before when reading, this was... im speachless speachless... applause is deserved


On Sunday January 14th, 2007, sIo (884) writes:
if i ask you to kill me after every word you write i'd be dead long enough to prove you've broken my heart.


On Tuesday January 9th, 2007, PoeticHellion (250) writes:
I think I almost like this one more than She Spoke Sanguine. Almost. ♥


On Monday January 8th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1136) writes:
"and I wore her sorrow like tear-stained romances torn out of my notebook. she didn't allow metaphors"..this might be one of my new favorites. so beautiful and soft..yet roaring with power. you're amazing, love.


On Monday January 8th, 2007, Instant Insanity (745) writes:
"torn out of my notebook. she didn't allow metaphors" I loved that stanza ][ ][


On Monday January 8th, 2007, dying angel (1328) writes:
i especially loved the ending. this is gorgeous jon.


On Monday January 8th, 2007, Lynaes (1125) writes:
"shoving a page into my chest. the ink eats me".. wow. Talk about digging into a person's core. This is amazing, Jon.


On Monday January 8th, 2007, Ashlar (258) writes:
Another beautiful write Jon... I am in awe of your talent...


On Monday January 8th, 2007, Mylissa (1075) writes:
I am in love...touching and beautiful.


On Monday January 8th, 2007, Alanarchy (1694) writes:
Reminds me of a Thursday song. "And she's speaking is starless skies like a migician that's lost their touch" One of my all time favorite lines. This whole thing vibed. Excellent, brother mamma jamma.


On Monday January 8th, 2007, Arianna (192) writes:
just another in this series that takes my breath away Jon. *muwah*


On Sunday January 7th, 2007, Strabo (47) writes:
I like the imagery. especially speaking obsidian - very nice


On Sunday January 7th, 2007, hate_doll (328) writes:
there are imperfections in everything, especially beauty and love...wonderful



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