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twilight. and I'm sober in my mind
another lit cigarette.
just call me
: the patron saint of falling.

sing. to the night.
these smoke songs and liquid clarity.
perfect harmony in this disarming
state of repairs. lately.
I'm crumbling. in a sense.
silently. defenseless. I'm begging
myself not to break.

twenty two years and counting.
one step too late. tripping on current heartaches.
rest easy- I scream. leave me
seemingly. breathless. tragic
they tell me.

and I'm a wreck.
car.crash in motion. e.motion-less
live action incident on a string.

click.burn.breathe-in
ashes are lost: drifting on shirt stains.
stereo-static. and tripping
the killswitch. slipping on loose ends
frayed edges and matchbooks
like lost hopes.
burn down the bridges

because it's hard to tiptoe
on halos and false prophets. when
there is no wooden pedestal
and god lives in the moments between
a breathe and a whisper.


I'll live my reason.
in the end. it's powerful. and
pointless is treason of the soul.

ten ten pm. -make a wish.
the stars are worthless.



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On Monday March 31st, 2008, Reefer_rave (229) writes:
oh what to say...


On Monday February 11th, 2008, xserratedsoulx (279) writes:
what a great last line!!!


On Friday December 21st, 2007, Pureheartless (39) writes:
i still like pancakes


On Sunday May 13th, 2007, Rain In The Willows (858) writes:
...you...


On Tuesday January 9th, 2007, vaultgrl (236) writes:
...."good lives in the moments between a breathe and a whiser" this line still gets me....everytime, i love it....great write, again


On Saturday December 16th, 2006, urbanhumility (1348) writes:
space and wisdom line your passive words......so very well spoken......urban


On Wednesday November 22nd, 2006, hate_doll (328) writes:
tragic, but oh so fucking astounding.


On Sunday November 19th, 2006, Astra Dei (645) writes:
This leaves me shattered. You've always been a master of words, and im humbled.


On Sunday November 19th, 2006, Michelle Xiao (507) writes:
gorgeous.. breathes faintly of life.


On Saturday November 18th, 2006, Alanarchy (1618) writes:
Hit a rough patch? Yeah, I know how you feel, dude. But you have to be down, so you know just how going up feels. Love this. I've had moments exactly like this. Write the fuck on.


On Saturday November 18th, 2006, Six-Out (1825) writes:
Sometimes I think we're brothers of the soul. thanks man.


On Saturday November 18th, 2006, carlosjackal (1649) writes:
..but you shall pick yourself up. This poem showed a strength in revealing weakness which made it beautiful. Keep writing, dude..


On Saturday November 18th, 2006, swing_the_hammer (76) writes:
i love it... maybe because we both mention patron saints in our latest poems... i miss talkin to you...


On Saturday November 18th, 2006, sIo (892) writes:
did you get what you wanted for your birthday?


On Saturday November 18th, 2006, vaultgrl (236) writes:
....*favs*....i really liked this....the flow...the meaning.....every little piece....it just consumed me while i was reading it....great write....


On Saturday November 18th, 2006, PoeticHellion (250) writes:
♥♥ happy belated birthday! (I love this)



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