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"shooting stars with whispered arrows [one thing]" by Six-Out

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one thing. one place.
subtle dreams- whispers lingering. adrift
seashell princess. shooting stars.
and a voice like a buttefly misfit.

on the edge of oblivion.
waves battering disasters. tomorrow creeping.
as the sunlight sillhouette- tip.toes over
the borders and boundries. sleeping
under star-splashes. misty moonlight
and the night says goodbye.

intent on interest. oblivious seems best
when the silence beams with
the leftovers of the cosmos.
eyes like blue flame- the water plays tricks
when existance is left in awe.
all feeling weightless. it's always about
tonight.


with one hand. and one mind.
the sand like stardust. lingering behind.
wandering this coastal land. searching for one time.
and time is endless.
in this moment.

one thing.

and all was left breathless.



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On Tuesday October 31st, 2006, Alanarchy (1688) writes:
Dude, I love how it seems like you through your concience to the wind, and just write straight from the soul. This one owns me. It reads like a battle cry.


On Tuesday October 31st, 2006, Alanarchy (1688) writes:
*throw*


On Tuesday October 31st, 2006, Rachel (393) writes:
:)


On Monday October 30th, 2006, verablue (159) writes:
love it! especially the 2nd stanza.


On Monday October 30th, 2006, dying angel (1328) writes:
"it's always about tonight." jon, you're amazing. i loved this. its like a story put together without excess detail. just all the important things. beautiful.


On Monday October 30th, 2006, Sealed Identity (17) writes:
I have been looking for work like this.. I appreciate your talent.


On Monday October 30th, 2006, hate_doll (328) writes:
"It's always about tonight", "the sand like stardust", so many beautiful little lines, so wonderfully working together for the momentum of this piece, which stops you at the edge of a cliff, and then you breathe out.


On Monday October 30th, 2006, hate_doll (328) writes:
in other words, I really adore this.



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