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sleep.love.
the floodgates are open-
but you're safe. with your head on the armrest.
and your bags too heavy
on the floor.

I can see the weight of the world in your eyes- when they're open.
and I can tell that you're worried.
I'd keep you safe if I could.
but they'd all tell me I'm just a romantic
the hopeless is implied
and I'm staring helplessly
as the chances- drift and float
and when you stood up.
I saw you kind of smile.
me a goodbye.

and even though I think we both know
that I'll never-ever. see you again.
when you left my sight- I missed you as if
we'd been together for ages.
when- in a sense. we'd never met.

and they tell me I'm hopeless.
a romantic wouldn't have let you walk away.
empty handed with just my daydreams
and silent thoughts.


of late nights and terminal trists
it's times like this
that I know I'm a poet.



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On Monday July 28th, 2008, Narcissa (748) writes:
I stumbled upon this piece and though it appears that it doesn't need any more praise...It touched the poet inside of me.


On Tuesday June 17th, 2008, totaltrip (48) writes:
this is my favorite i think.


On Saturday May 24th, 2008, Velvet_Raventon (702) writes:
I thought I'd comment again, because this is so beautiful. ~V.


On Sunday December 3rd, 2006, Zen (631) writes:
heh


On Saturday November 11th, 2006, Mylissa (1090) writes:
Insanely beautifully!


On Thursday November 9th, 2006, carlosjackal (1647) writes:
Words fail me. Except to say, Falling in love is so easy when caught in moments like that you describe, but, man, how it can paralyse us, too. I hope you come back with some more stuff soon.


On Friday September 15th, 2006, Tracer (140) writes:
Funny the hypocracy that follows the notions of being a romantic...misunderstood, and then called out when you finally give in. A poet at heart, brah, thats all you need to be. Saddening story (excellent crafting) that continually plays out...Corey


On Thursday September 14th, 2006, Rain In The Willows (858) writes:
'I'd keep you safe if I could' 'and even though I think we both know that I'll never-ever. see you again...' You'll always be nothing short of excellence...well written and thought provoking.


On Tuesday September 12th, 2006, The Fool (1005) writes:
Wow, Jon this left me in shivers, and wanting to read more. You left me in awed beauty~Gothic


On Tuesday September 12th, 2006, PoeticHellion (250) writes:
*falls out of chair* Jon, I'm in love with you.


On Tuesday September 12th, 2006, Karma Doll (258) writes:
This is beyond beauty Jon..this is fed by your lifeforce..this way of feeling..this way of love...perfect ~Mel


On Tuesday September 12th, 2006, Alanarchy (1618) writes:
It get's to me sometimes. It's almost a blessing AND a curse. Sorta like Spiderman :D You always hit the mark man. Always, and never leave me wanting more, wishing the work would just keep going at the same time. Excellent.


On Tuesday September 12th, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (692) writes:
I too really love the lines quoted by Dying_Angel, this is indeed a delicate, beautiful piece that is coloured with sadness. Love your work. Ciao, T/S


On Monday September 11th, 2006, dying angel (1344) writes:
"and they tell me I'm hopeless. a romantic wouldn't have let you walk away." everyone has a story. and sometimes you look into a stranger's eyes and wish to know their story. this was beautiful. proves you are a poet.


On Monday September 11th, 2006, Velvet_Raventon (702) writes:
Oh yes you are. That was so delicately beautiful. ~V.


On Monday September 11th, 2006, sIo (892) writes:
makes me cry.


On Wednesday September 13th, 2006, swing_the_hammer (76) writes:
makes me cry, too.


On Sunday September 10th, 2006, Astra Dei (645) writes:
Your writing always leaves me with broken hearts and tears.


On Sunday September 10th, 2006, Fornever_Never (258) writes:
:) ... Jon havent read something wonderful from you in a while .. this left the sweetest taste in my mouth .. one that will linger for a while :)~T~


On Sunday September 10th, 2006, veingo (589) writes:
Damn, man. I could have written a hundres stories like this. But never...NEVER so gracefully, as you have. ^V^


On Sunday September 10th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1161) writes:
"it's times like this that I know I'm a poet." indeed you are..only a poet could make me feel this way after reading a piece of such artistic beauty. you're amazing.



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