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bang [you're dead]

dreamstocks and broken heartaches.
it makes us human.
is what she whispered- into my ear.
as I put the gun to her head.

bang.

we're a little shattered.
and a little mesmorized. her eyes.
good god. her eyes.
her tears.
and in the end, I'm good for nothing.

and words can be daggers
but they're throwing bullets- and we're left hiding.
under the sun starched skies.
left with starless goodbyes. goodnights.
goodlifes.
and fireflies.
is what they'd rip from this ignorance.
bliss is in the eye of the neglector.

tipsy and misguided. to sweet disdain
and this liquid harmony.
I'm metaphor. past.

now. kiss me.
in sweet spite.

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On Thursday February 9th, 2006, An Expired Member (7) writes:

Another on I love. Words can be like daggers, get out of my head.

On Monday January 30th, 2006, Alanarchy (1696) writes:

and words can be daggers *but they're throwing bullets- and we're left hiding. under the sun starched skies. left with starless goodbyes.* I wasn't prepared for this, man. words ride on your shoulder.

On Monday January 9th, 2006, dying angel (1309) writes:

"now. kiss me. /in sweet spite." what can i say to truly express how good this was? When i find the right words ill let you know. ~*~Angel~*~

On Friday December 30th, 2005, James_the_Saint (131) writes:

You're so on my favorites. Bitch. Ya, I said it.

On Thursday December 22nd, 2005, Astra Dei (639) writes:

ouch... this makes me sad

On Tuesday December 20th, 2005, coly (76) writes:

i love it six your an aswome poet my fav part is the to paragraph

On Tuesday December 20th, 2005, capt_funguy (993) writes:

hmmm .. and the past is all thats left with a whole lot of explaining to do ... the past will tell its truth whilst getting trampled .. the only thing clear in the end will be the echo --

On Tuesday December 20th, 2005, capt_funguy (993) writes:

where i went with it anyway ... smooth write , slick ending .... funguy

On Monday December 19th, 2005, Markus Porkwing (708) writes:

So visceral you are. I hardly comment, but I know now why so many others do. Bleh. Keep up the good writes.

On Monday December 19th, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (980) writes:

You nailed it man. I love the last two lines, perfect ending. "and words can be daggers but they're throwing bullets- and we're left hiding." Perfect man. ~Ryan

On Monday December 19th, 2005, sIo (872) writes:

no matter what i think some part of me will always love you. this was beautiful

On Monday December 19th, 2005, Lotophagi (449) writes:

when I saw the title I thought this had to be you.... this is beautiful, liquid, full of desire and intense lyrical imagery. sublime write in the very essence of sublimity. Thank you.

On Monday December 19th, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:

i absolutely love you. this is beautiful six child, beautiful.

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