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punctured. perfection
picturesque in a sense. we're pierced
placed on a pedestal of prepackaged nonsense.
sold souls drifting in a summer breeze.
please me this once.

please.

empty empathy. and erased sympathy
silly, it seemed. lost in the inseams of these incessant dreams
weak in the knees for no apparent cause.
we're all flawed.
[fallen angels that never had wings]
believe me. I'm lost.
and the cost is more than the meaning.

.
breaking. there's the point in every structure.
every inch- and tapped vein. it'll eventually rupture.
.

she spoke to me in silent symphonies. when my hands were shaking
street corners. the lights. she'd dance with me.
and tell me it's never alright.
these nights get too long.
.

and I broke the shadow dancers. killed the silhouettes
cried out in fear to the stars.
because there's no heaven left.
no words to say a prayer. and no heart to try to ease.
no hope in fairytale endings. no.
there's no reason left to believe.

and I broke my fist into five seperate points.
each one marking a time. when time meant more than nothing.


please me this once. and please.
[make me want to believe]



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On Monday January 30th, 2006, Alanarchy (1696) writes:
Killed me in a most fortunate way. Just hypnotic man. You humble me.


On Sunday October 30th, 2005, manywalks (949) writes:
Well, yes, if i had balls they would have definately been kicked. Ah little taco bean, you never fail. ~ wen


On Saturday October 29th, 2005, Rachel (392) writes:
Jesus christ, Jon. You'll never lose the ability to bring me to tears.


On Saturday October 29th, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (980) writes:
Last full stanza kicked me in my balls. Sometimes the things that would give momentary promise tell everlasting lies. Doesn't stop us from craving the immediate relief. Cool write.


On Friday October 28th, 2005, glasshouse (780) writes:
this was brilliant. what more is there to say? -Glass


On Friday October 28th, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1048) writes:
oh wow...this is beautiful. I won't deny that you made my exhaustion-leaded eyes shine with every glittering word...you have braced my smile with galaxies and I would have it no other way. Lovely. *Evangel*


On Friday October 28th, 2005, nell (328) writes:
thet second to last bit, eloquently said...i must say your best always comes from the worst six,now it's up ot you to say whether that is a blessing or a curse


On Friday October 28th, 2005, Mistress Shadow (382) writes:
Unlike Jerrica, I can pick my fav: "no hope in fairytale endings. no. /there's no reason left to believe."-wow. ~T~


On Friday October 28th, 2005, blue (1757) writes:
nifty


On Friday October 28th, 2005, Raven (373) writes:
This seemed... slightly disjunct in its ways as it flowed. Nevertheless, there's an aching melancholy in the background that left a lump in my throat...especially when the second last stanza hit a chord somewhere deep.


On Friday October 28th, 2005, Err0r (564) writes:
Pardon the cliche statement, but this left me breathless....by chance are you a diamond? ;) Wonderful write mister.


On Friday October 28th, 2005, Jerrica (122) writes:
Excellently done. You always have such a strong ending to all of your works. I really like that. I don't know which line is my favorite and I don't think I could pick out just one. Beautiful. *J*



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