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she spoke sanguine to me.
tripping on harp-hearted stilettos. mellow smoke rails
and a nicotine lip. for good measure

a pocket-book romance. that she keeps for the rainy days
when her eyes won't dry. and the stars fall like ashes onto the wet cement
clutching reality with her right hand. standing under a streetlamp
and they've always told her that
these were the best days of her life.

wind whispering sweet tones of anguished cries.
she'd lie to me- if it would make my world turn orange
because she never liked the taste of these sunken blues.
speaking in tongues marked by periods of silence.
puncutated to fit the needs of whoever kept her depth at bay.
and she'd always tell me I was never meant to weather this storm.

and her voice rang when she sang Janis to the treetops
telling her baby to cry. and saying how one fist in the air is meaningless
when the crowd remains seated.
and she'd sit on the curb. these were the best days of her life

when she spoke stucco heartbreaks. lacing each thread with innocence
she'd tell me to dance to her pulse- but my feet kept slipping
cutting her blood-flow. as she spoke to me in vibrant reds.

these humid nights take my breath away



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On Friday January 4th, 2008, LadyMalice (28) writes:
This is beautiful. =)


On Wednesday September 19th, 2007, An Expired Member (1) writes:
This is absolutely gorgeous.


On Thursday March 1st, 2007, DarkLord (9) writes:
Incredibly riveting...


On Sunday January 28th, 2007, zanewill (117) writes:
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On Thursday September 14th, 2006, i tremble (47) writes:
your words steal both my breath and soul.


On Wednesday May 3rd, 2006, PoeticHellion (250) writes:
Everytime I read this I die a little. That's how good it is... still.


On Thursday April 6th, 2006, Karma Doll (263) writes:
All the world is a magic ride..and your words are the magician Your words weave a web that you beg to be caught in....you are the perfect spider


On Thursday April 6th, 2006, Six-Out (1831) writes:
This has to be one of the best comments I've ever recieved. You rock. :)


On Friday March 3rd, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1165) writes:
i can't believe i've never told you how much a love this..i've read this so many times..but this, just like all of your writes, just wraps itself around my brain..gah. you are just too amazing.


On Saturday October 22nd, 2005, Bellezza (26) writes:
Beautiful..


On Sunday October 9th, 2005, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:
I understand the lil following this gained. And I wonder...how did you write this??


On Sunday January 14th, 2007, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:
I understand why this a fav of so many. I wonder how could you write this...how could anybody write this? It's so beautiful and undescribable...I'm impressed. It's casts it's own reflection into the darkness...thats beautiful.


On Wednesday October 5th, 2005, An Expired Member (58) writes:
hmmm... i could have sworn i've commented on this before. i guess not. my bad. i have to agree with ApathysKiss. this was so nostalgic. it was incredible.


On Tuesday October 4th, 2005, ApathysKiss (471) writes:
how nostalgic....like a song spinning in my head while i'm swinging beneath a tree...i feel the urge to inflate your head with commendation...:p ~michelle


On Tuesday October 4th, 2005, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
its been a long time since i've been here to read, but you have certainly developed a more mature style


On Tuesday October 4th, 2005, Six-Out (1831) writes:
This...makes me incredibly happy.


On Thursday September 29th, 2005, Crysa (41) writes:
So very vivid.


On Friday September 23rd, 2005, Twilight (2114) writes:
well fuck a fucking duck. thats poetry. gorgeous write jon...you sexy thang.


On Wednesday September 14th, 2005, Astra Dei (649) writes:
hmmm... this has given me something to pnnder over. I like it


On Wednesday September 14th, 2005, antiScripsony (40) writes:
Ohhh, I love it. That first line, specifically, kicks it off on such a strong note.


On Tuesday September 13th, 2005, Philla (142) writes:
Oh wow. This is simply beautiful. How is it that every single one of your poems bring tears to my eyes and leave my heart longing for more? -*Philla*-


On Monday September 12th, 2005, SamoneDrone (410) writes:
this poem took my breath away. you write such beauty. there were so many lines in her that made me shiver that i wouldn't be able to give you a favorite one if i tried. ....-samone


On Monday September 12th, 2005, PoeticHellion (250) writes:
Whoaa. I really like it. The way you wrote it is awesome.


On Monday September 12th, 2005, Ashlar (265) writes:
Awesome...Wicked...I am rendered speechless by your talent...


On Sunday September 11th, 2005, sIo (895) writes:
i can't endure any word of this and i can't take my eyes away from anyword you utter or write. i can only offer empty hands and a silence to take your heart away.


On Sunday September 11th, 2005, AniDayz (1297) writes:
*'a pocket-book romance.that she keeps for the rainy days...'speaking in tongues marked in periods of silence. punctuated to fit the needs of whoever kept her depth at bay...'*


On Sunday September 11th, 2005, AniDayz (1297) writes:
youre insanely gifted with such masterful ways of portraying such intimate emotion,strung together through and through...continuosly blowing my heart to pieces and catching it up inside staircases of my spiraling mind. your words glow with intensity...


On Sunday September 11th, 2005, An Expired Member (29) writes:
Art.


On Sunday September 11th, 2005, glasshouse (812) writes:
"she'd lie to me- if it would make my world turn orange because she never liked the taste of these sunken blues." oh jon. this was amazing. i held my breath through every single word. she is a painting. -Glass


On Sunday September 11th, 2005, Gideon Lost (194) writes:
"speaking in tongues marked by periods of silence." love this line. The whole piece made me want to meet this person. Great job. -Gideon


On Sunday September 11th, 2005, wonderlandhysteria (2195) writes:
Flatline.


On Sunday September 11th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (877) writes:
agreed.



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